Come and Find Me In My Solitude

It’s again one of those evenings
It’s again one of those pains
It’s again one of those
moments of loneliness;

When a whiff of fragrance in the air
sets the heart pounding,
When the soothing moonlight
sets the soul on fire,

When you cry
and couldn’t shed tears,
When you drink the ocean
and couldn’t quench the thirst,

When you envy the twinkling stars
and hate the free roaming clouds,
When time stands still
and each moment you live
seems like an eternity,

When at each breath in you live
and at each breath out you die!


~12/1/16
~Mystic Rose contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 20, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Abdul, this is a very good poem to follow... LINDA
Krampe Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 3:43 PM
Congrats on your placement, Abdul. Agnes
Vinson Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 2:46 PM
Lonely, yes, but this is a lush poem; I read it several times, inhaling it, drinking it in. Well done, Abdul! : )
Mandani Avatar
December 6, 2016 at 12:19 PM
Thanks Doug for your comment--it's a lush comment, I read it and reread it! Lol
Sands Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 1:27 PM
Congratulations!
White Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 1:14 PM
Congratulations on your placement! I understand about those evenings
White Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 10:41 PM
In the company of a few good poetry books, a nice cup of coffee and nightly conversations. Deal!
Mandani Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 1:49 PM
Let's spend some evenings together then! Lol.
White Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 11:53 PM
I feel your loneliness.... Good luck in the contest.
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