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Come Come Come my hands are cold, my feet are numb, I’ve been waiting for you to come. Listen to the rhythmic sound of the drum, it is summoning you to come, come and minster to my blazing soul, and help me achieve my dancing goal. Leap beyond the shadows of death, and purge me with your mystical breath, tear off my sleepless gown, and cool me down with your powerful sound. Follow the sound of the drums and come, If you don’t come I will be undone, thousands of them surround the gate, come before it's too late. Moan groan wiggle and scream, entrance me in your solitary dreams. pull out your dangling whistle stretch my body, breath upon my throbbing flesh, and captivate me in your powerful net. Release your knob and come, shoot me with your inflated gun, I have waited for this eternal bliss, but something stands amiss. ©2013 Christine Phillips

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Date: 6/9/2013 12:00:00 AM
Intrigueing tapestry of double-entendre.
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Date: 4/20/2013 10:15:00 AM
Its' good to be alive and know it. Most people sleep walk from the cradle to the grave. Keep on thinking free. Michael
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Date: 4/10/2013 1:31:00 PM
Hi Christine, this poem intensified as it progressed, nice touch...& agreed w/Andrea...thanks for stopping by my work.....often....I am unable to write more than I do 'cuz if a line doesn't (slam the door) I won't ink it...which can hurt my effort....but.....bells ya-know....even if a couple lines (slam the door) I'm good....love, jimbo
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Date: 4/10/2013 1:46:00 AM
beautiful poem with high feelings I hope you the best go on great poet....
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Date: 4/9/2013 2:34:00 PM
Hmmm, so I DID get right the play on words! This is very unique writing. I like the assonance you used with the u sound as in drums, come, summoning. That was very well crafted there!!
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Date: 4/9/2013 2:56:00 AM
- Christine, thanks for your fine poem - Well done, I like it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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