Comatose

I see miles and miles of lavender...
Fields of lavender
The fragrance stimulates my entire being..
Colors in the atmosphere so intense..
So vivid..
So vibrant..

Never have seen so many magnificent colors..
There are colors of which..
I have never know existed
Rejuvenation I feel..
Reborn I feel..
Revived I feel..
The previous I..
Isn't I..

Previous in a crisis..
In crisis mode..
Living life on survival mode..
In a life threatening emergency..
Waiting for crisis..
Expecting crisis..
To explode with the grandest fury..

Fury followed by suffering..
Succumb to suffering it was
Moments of serenity non existent..

Cherished loved ones..
Special friends pour their sadness
tears of pain it is..
Teardrops multiply..
Thus then the tears become an ocean..

Simultaneously all this occurs..

I remembered all fields..
Of lavender..
The intoxication of the lavender fragrance..
The stimulation upon my entire being..
The transformation as such..

Cherised loved ones..
Dearest friends..
Please do not despair..
I am alive..

All while in my sleepy slumber..
In comatose land..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Arribas Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 11:09 AM
LAVENDER THE STIMULANT THAT AROUSES THE SENSES. NICE WORK
B. Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 1:10 PM
"Thank you so my for your kind feedback, John". I really appreciated it !!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 10:55 AM
Rejuvenation, reborn, revived all give the reader hope that the comatose state might be giving up its grip. A pleasure to read, Robertina.
Blanca Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 7:06 PM
The senses can be very telling Robertina. Smell is one that brings back memories. Welcome to Poetry Soup
Gauthier Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 11:17 PM
A most pleasant read, Robertina.
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