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HE has been in a Coma, for three and a half years. His sweet wife LENORE has cried a billion tears. Wait a minute; Did I go Astray, WAS it me that DIED that day. The sorrow, agony, and pain has all been in my Brain. Is She the One that suffers; My ROYAL QUEEN Doth Reign. I watched as SHE came over TO give me my last HUG. Lenore I really LOVEYOU : Please don’t pull the Plug. I know SHE really LOVED me : but if it stops HER pain. Then pull the plug : So my LENORE can live AGAIN Oh my GOD I‘m going Home. My LOVE is living Still; I must say Good-bye to my Heartbeat ; my LOVE JILL. The plug is pulled. My soul takes flight : HEAVEN BOUND. LENORE I’m going HOME ; My soul can finally rest : WAITING FOR YOU My Heart stops, My head rest gently on the pillow on the bed. My eyes wide open ; THANK GOD I know I’m D E A ---- Then I Awoke Inspired by The Rambling POET"S Contest " I Dreamed "

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Date: 8/16/2015 2:15:00 AM
Kudos on your poem being featured this week. Nice write!
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Date: 8/16/2015 1:15:00 AM
HG Daniel, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page :). **SKAT**
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Date: 12/22/2011 8:43:00 PM
Another breathtaking poem. I especially like the first lines. It really pulls on my heartstrings! Always, Laura
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Date: 9/14/2010 12:54:00 PM
wow, this was in one of my contests, I hope I placed it, if not I must be nuts, I think it is very well written, and it took my breath away right till the end.. Constance
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Date: 8/9/2015 11:29:00 PM
Dear Broken Wings - Constance, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I want YOU to Know that this POEM WAS Inspired by your contest but it was not an Entrée. I'm sure if it had been YOU would have placed it LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
Date: 3/17/2009 10:53:00 AM
great poem HG! thanks for all your comments, Jim
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