Coma

HE has been in a Coma, for three and a half years.
His sweet wife LENORE has cried a billion tears.
Wait a minute; Did I go Astray, WAS it me that DIED that day.
 The sorrow, agony, and pain has all been in my Brain.
Is She the One that suffers; My ROYAL QUEEN Doth Reign.

I watched as SHE came over TO give me my last HUG.
Lenore I really LOVEYOU : Please don’t pull the Plug.
I know SHE really LOVED me : but if it stops HER pain.
Then pull the plug : So my LENORE can live AGAIN

Oh my GOD I‘m going Home. My LOVE is living Still;
I  must say Good-bye to my Heartbeat ; my LOVE   JILL.
The plug is pulled. My soul takes flight : HEAVEN  BOUND.
LENORE I’m going HOME ; My soul can finally rest : WAITING FOR YOU 
My Heart stops, My head rest gently on the pillow on the bed.
My eyes wide open ; THANK GOD I know I’m     D  E  A  ----
 
                               Then  I  Awoke
Inspired by The Rambling POET"S Contest " I Dreamed "
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Cwiak Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 2:15 AM
Kudos on your poem being featured this week. Nice write!
A  Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 1:15 AM
HG Daniel, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page :). **SKAT**
Breidenthal Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 8:43 PM
Another breathtaking poem. I especially like the first lines. It really pulls on my heartstrings! Always, Laura
La France Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 12:54 PM
wow, this was in one of my contests, I hope I placed it, if not I must be nuts, I think it is very well written, and it took my breath away right till the end.. Constance
Esquire Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 11:29 PM
Dear Broken Wings - Constance, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I want YOU to Know that this POEM WAS Inspired by your contest but it was not an Entrée. I'm sure if it had been YOU would have placed it LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
Goff Avatar
March 17, 2009 at 10:53 AM
great poem HG! thanks for all your comments, Jim
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