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Colours of My Dream

Iridescent bubbles, in my sleep, I see a mishmash of things: some dear to me, some odd - mind's subtle hues gleam, a hodgepodge they seem; Aw! in my dream I see sky with two suns and stream - baffling scenes, mismatch, I deem; Still, I love my mind's craftwork, I glee, iridescent bubbles, in my sleep, I see
Date: 01/22/2023 Writing Challenge - Andaree Form - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 9/12/2023 1:07:00 PM
wow, you did an Andaree. So nice of you to honor my poetry form with this cute poem for a contest of Constance. Very belated congrats to you.
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Date: 3/1/2023 6:40:00 PM
Excellent desription of dreams, "mishmash" "hodgepodge" . I like this one alot, Anitha
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Date: 2/5/2023 11:52:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/4/2023 2:57:00 PM
Congratulations Anita. A love sly poem. Panagiota
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Date: 2/4/2023 7:15:00 AM
Ani, a lovely poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge, Andaree form, well done, Constance
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Date: 1/24/2023 5:36:00 AM
"hodgepodge" makes dreams very beautiful and colorful. Great work!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/24/2023 8:38:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris for the visit and kind words of appreciation... God bless... ~ Ani
Date: 1/22/2023 7:22:00 AM
Dearest Ani , my heart was thinking of you and then I found this new poem of yours …. A Sunday morning gift . Your minds eye is so creative and fun . An arena where anything is possible ! I love Iridescent bubbles in my sleep !! Big hugs to you my friend . I posted a new poem as well . Love to you , Susan :) xo
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/24/2023 8:38:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation dear Susan... I too love the dreams I have... here I used the metaphor of 'bubbles' for my dreams as they are short-lived... Always glad and so inspired by reading your poems too my friend... Big hugs back at you... ~ Ani

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