Anitha Jayasankar Poet Rhyme

Colours of My Dream

Iridescent bubbles, in my sleep, I see
a mishmash of things: some dear to me, 
some odd - mind's subtle hues gleam, 
a hodgepodge they seem;
Aw! in my
dream
I see sky
with two suns and stream -
baffling scenes, mismatch, I deem;
Still, I love my mind's craftwork, I glee, 
iridescent bubbles, in my sleep, I see

Date: 01/22/2023
Writing Challenge - Andaree Form - Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

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Andrea Dietrich September 12, 2023 at 1:07 PM wow, you did an Andaree. So nice of you to honor my poetry form with this cute poem for a contest of Constance. Very belated congrats to you.

Daniel Turner March 1, 2023 at 6:40 PM Excellent desription of dreams, "mishmash" "hodgepodge" . I like this one alot, Anitha

Sara Kendrick February 5, 2023 at 11:52 PM Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara

Panagiota Romios February 4, 2023 at 2:57 PM Congratulations Anita. A love sly poem. Panagiota

Constance La France February 4, 2023 at 7:15 AM Ani, a lovely poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge, Andaree form, well done, Constance

Christuraj Alex January 24, 2023 at 5:36 AM "hodgepodge" makes dreams very beautiful and colorful. Great work! Anitha Jayasankar January 24, 2023 at 8:38 PM Thank you so much Chris for the visit and kind words of appreciation... God bless... ~ Ani

Susan Lawrence January 22, 2023 at 7:22 AM Dearest Ani , my heart was thinking of you and then I found this new poem of yours …. A Sunday morning gift . Your minds eye is so creative and fun . An arena where anything is possible ! I love Iridescent bubbles in my sleep !! Big hugs to you my friend . I posted a new poem as well . Love to you , Susan :) xo Anitha Jayasankar January 24, 2023 at 8:38 PM Thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation dear Susan... I too love the dreams I have... here I used the metaphor of 'bubbles' for my dreams as they are short-lived... Always glad and so inspired by reading your poems too my friend... Big hugs back at you... ~ Ani