Jenish Somadas Poet Monorhyme

Colours of Minds

Dark ones are dark, evil and bleak
Tawny is better, but helpless and weak
Blue ones are active, yet maybe a freak
Red is normal, common who seek
Yellow is great, wise and unique
White is best, divine and mystique
Colours of skin, I didn’t speak
Colours of minds that I bespeak.






Won second place in First Time Here - Any Monorhyme Poetry Contest sponsored by William Kekaula

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Shirley Hawkins January 19, 2020 at 5:10 PM Congratulations on your poem, I am learning more every day about poetry thanks to poetry soup. Much deeper than simple rhyme I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you ... Shirley Jenish Somadas January 19, 2020 at 10:49 PM Thank you Shirley for your precious time and comment.. I'm honoured..

William Kelii Kekaula January 15, 2020 at 3:23 PM That was a penetrable piece Jenish, much enjoyed, and thank you for your participation, and my compliments on your placement~@wk Jenish Somadas January 15, 2020 at 11:14 PM Thank you William for organizing this wonderful contest and placing me in it..

Juliet Ligon December 31, 2019 at 1:18 PM Thanks for the poetic incite. I don't know very much about chakras, but I find it interesting. Juliet Ligon December 31, 2019 at 10:53 PM Thanks for the clarification. (I just googled the difference in meaning, so now you are causing me to learn.) Jenish Somadas December 31, 2019 at 9:12 PM The colours in the aura...Thank you Juliet..

Vijay Pandit December 31, 2019 at 7:31 AM Very intelligent write--I enjoyed the read--all the best, Jenish. Jenish Somadas December 31, 2019 at 7:42 AM Thank you Vijay..