Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

Colours In Our Lives

Green with envy or feeling blue
These are emotions that can affect you
Golden sunlight on a sandy beach
This dream scene may be far out of our reach
Crystal clear raindrops make us wetter and wetter
Rose tinted spectacles make everything seem better
Sultry brown eyes and ruby red lips
Bluebells in the woods and hawthorn hips
The colourful sight that really makes my day
Is seeing a glorious rainbow over Douglas Bay

22nd April 2013

Submitted to colourful verse contest
Sponsored by Charlotte Puddifoot

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Mohan Chutani May 26, 2014 at 11:21 AM shows your complete acceptance of all hues & shades of life- a balace that colours bestow on us to accept thru highs and lows of life each faces. inspired me too. Mohan Jan Allison May 26, 2014 at 11:31 AM Thanks for that lovely comment Mohan. Hugs Jan xxx

Robert Lindley May 9, 2014 at 8:34 AM SO DESCRIPTIVE... This brought back sweet memories to me of a lost love. "Sultry brown eyes and ruby red lips Bluebells in the woods and hawthorn hips" A big thanks for that too! To my fav it goes! Robert Lindley May 26, 2014 at 6:14 PM I remembered this great write my friend. Came back to add both this wonderful write and you the author to my fav list.. Jan Allison May 9, 2014 at 11:05 AM Thanks for the lovely comments Robert am so pleased you liked my colourful poem. Hugs Jan xxx

Deborah Shiells May 1, 2014 at 11:19 AM Hi Jan, Now this was spectacular!! You have a great way of expressing yourself. Thanks so much for sharing this with us. Best of luck to you in the contest:~) Peace, Deborah Jan Allison May 1, 2014 at 12:12 PM Thanks Deborah for the lovely comment. I've only been posting since February and am learning so much every day. hugs Jan xx

Verlena S. Walker April 24, 2014 at 5:32 AM Beautiful Jan... GL in the contest... Verlena Jan Allison April 24, 2014 at 5:46 AM Thanks Verlena Hugs Jan xx

Julie Clark April 24, 2014 at 3:33 AM what a beautiful coloured poem its counguring up beautiful scenes Jan Allison April 24, 2014 at 3:37 AM Thanks so much for the lovely comment Julie. Hugs Jan x

Jack Ellison April 23, 2014 at 5:31 PM Such a sensual write dear Sis! You is da bomb! LOL Loving hugs, Brother Jack (I feel saintly!) XOXOX Jan Allison April 23, 2014 at 5:35 PM Aww thanks for dropping by Jack hope you are feeling better xxxx hugs Jan xxxx

Anne-Lise Andresen April 23, 2014 at 12:19 PM - Jan my friend, the last two weeks there have been a beautiful spring weather here - P-soup does not come as first choice when spring is here - but today I am happy to visit your beautiful poem to day - a pleasure to read it :) - Thank you for the glorious rainbow :) - Luck in contest !! - Enjoy the spring you too :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison April 23, 2014 at 1:42 PM Oh dear - suggest you don't read my poem 'Sunday dinner' then (blushes) Hugs Jan x Anne-Lise Andresen April 23, 2014 at 12:53 PM .... The sweet little lamb babies which springs with their mother in the spring sun :))....do not eat them :(((( Jan Allison April 23, 2014 at 12:40 PM Thanks Anne Lise - yes it is so beautiful this season and I hope to get more inspiration - apart from the lambs for my dinner :-( Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich April 22, 2014 at 5:41 PM this has a little something of everything with color. A fun one to read, Jan!! Jan Allison April 23, 2014 at 5:30 AM Thanks for dropping by Andrea. Hugs Jan x

Keith O.J. Hunt April 22, 2014 at 2:41 PM Rainbow love.... Very sensuous Jan! Jan Allison April 22, 2014 at 2:52 PM thanks for dropping by Keith and the lovely comment hugs Jan x

Dr.Ram Mehta April 22, 2014 at 10:12 AM Very colorful write, Jan Jan Allison April 22, 2014 at 10:44 AM Thank you so much for dropping by Dr Mehta. Hugs Jan x

Tim Smith April 22, 2014 at 9:26 AM Very colorful and creative Jan....The first two lines reminded me of the old "mood" rings.....Hugs Tim Jan Allison April 22, 2014 at 10:43 AM Thanks Tim I saw there were 2 spaces left for the contest so thought I'd give it a go. Hugs Jan x

Eileen Manassian April 22, 2014 at 8:11 AM I love this, Jan. :) You brought me smiles. I feel the sincerity and beauty in every line. Bless you! Hugs Jan Allison April 22, 2014 at 8:14 AM Thanks Eileen doubt it will be a winner but colours do have such an effect on how we feel. Hugs Jan xx