Colours

Colours In my head are swirls of different colours, A spiderweb of connected lines in Constant Erratic Movement I can stop it......only for seconds I am learning to keep it still There is too much, The colours are taking over the space I need To return to Peace December 2016

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/16/2016 7:35:00 AM

Excellent, congrats on your top placement.

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/15/2016 11:43:00 PM

Tanis, a great poem! Vibrant and descriptive, so complete.

Lewis Raynes

Date: 12/15/2016 7:50:00 PM

congratulations Tanis, this was a great little explanation of inside your mind, loved it.

Betty Janko

Date: 12/15/2016 10:42:00 AM

Dear Tanis, at times like that you should strive to be color blind! Great poem my friend. Betty

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/12/2016 10:19:00 AM

They aren't very nice colors! To me, you just described being hit with #@*^% out of left field and anxiety overload has exploded in your mind and you know that peace will be awhile coming! Sorting and absorbing the 'colors' needs done first. All that is what I actually felt while reading your work - whether your intention or not. To me, that means your poem sure worked! All the best ... CayCay