Colours

C annot imagine my world without colours, even if inclined
O h my god, myriad hues of flowers reinvigorate us mankind
L ove and romance in black ‘n white, are you out of your mind
O f the seven colours, red is hot, quickly lets one feel aligned 
U nder shadow of dark colous, soft hues make a painting refined
R ainbow, a beautiful bright arch after prolonged rain grind
S eems God was bored of heavenly white and colours he twined.


Contest: Colours 
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton
Date Write:26.6.2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 7:04 AM
Congrats on a fine win Mohan
Chutani Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 7:36 AM
Thanks Joseph.
Kiser Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 1:00 PM
Bravo! A really fantastic poem.
Chutani Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 7:37 AM
Thanx MLK. Mohan
Sietesantos Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 11:23 AM
Congratulations, dear Mohan, for a very lovely, colorful win! Well done.
Chutani Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 7:35 AM
Thanks Pandita.
Nair Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 6:25 AM
A nice composition, Congrats, Mohan!!
Chutani Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 7:15 AM
Thanx Jagath for your complements. Mohan
Callus Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 6:16 AM
Congratulations, Mohan! A merited win for a colourful and lovely poem. The acrostic form has been tackled with ease and fluency. // paul
Chutani Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 7:14 AM
Thanx Paul for your wishes. Acrostic seems to be simple but rhymed acrostic takes a bit of more effort. Mohan
Lawless Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 9:55 PM
So, a rhyming acrostic full of color. Very nicely done. Congrats on a deserved placement.
Chutani Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 10:11 PM
Thanx John, my new friend for your visit and wishes. Mohan
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 8:39 PM
this is cute and creative, Mohan, and it did well in the contest, deservedly so. Congrats for your win.
Chutani Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 10:10 PM
Thanx Andrea for your complements. Mohan
Hamilton Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 5:29 PM
superb acrostic Mohan that brings colour alive congrats on 2nd place ty for entering hugs
Chutani Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 7:52 PM
thankyou very much Shadow for enjoying my write on colours and placing it well. honoured to have your continued and valued support. Mohan
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