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I’m sorry, I didn’t catch you name ‘Yellow, but my friends call me Yell” Say again? I didn’t quite hear you “Yellow!! But my friends call me Yell!!” There’s certainly no need to yell at me sir “Sh-t…I said Yellow!! But my friends call”… Ahh, I see, so you’re a yellow fellow then? “Okay whatever, yeah, I’m a yellow fellow” Well, there’s nothing at all to be afraid of sir “You givin’ me a SEVERE case of the red ass here!” A red donkey? Might I suggest a paint job? “You and me are fixin’ to visit the hospital bud” Well, I’m certainly no doctor but it could be jaundice “You’re fixin, to NEED a doctor, you yellow bellied”… By the way, do you remember that song Mellow Yel… (Slam-bam-ooof)-----“Yep, Donovan did it"... Date written: 12/1/2014 Submitted for: Shadow Hamilton's contest

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Date: 6/27/2014 6:48:00 AM
Quite witty it is, Tim, and a nice poem as a whole. Congrats, friend!!
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Date: 6/26/2014 8:55:00 PM
you are a great SPOOFER, Tim. Yep, I remember this one. I just saw the winner above yours was from that yellow contest of a few months back too!! Congrats for the win.
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Date: 6/26/2014 8:43:00 PM
Tim, a funny side of colours and a good win. Mohan
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Date: 12/12/2013 5:13:00 PM
Creative winning work..Way to go Tim..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/11/2013 8:36:00 AM
lovely win Tim....Linda
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Date: 12/10/2013 10:06:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Tim
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Date: 12/10/2013 6:04:00 PM
Oh my yeah!!!!! So glad you made it!!!!! Congratulations Tim...awesome poem...
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Date: 12/10/2013 4:14:00 PM
YAYYYY, glad to see this one as I finish up the list. Big congrats to you , Tim. and now I can leave my work and go home. I accomplished my goal today to see the two newest winner lists!!
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Date: 12/10/2013 11:19:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in: "THE SOUND OF COLOR" contest: Sponsored by: Monterey Sirak - Nice to join and nice to read your poem Tim. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/10/2013 9:00:00 AM
This poem was entertaining and fun! I enjoyed your take on the contest. By the way I love the song Mellow Yellow. Congrats
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Date: 12/8/2013 3:10:00 PM
Hahaha, I read this one twice for an extra laugh, funny man. Good, entertaining poetry, the kind I like best. You go!! Licia :-)
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Date: 12/6/2013 6:55:00 PM
haha, here is one I missed. LOVE that reference to Donovan. Mellow yellow, it sure dates us. heehee.
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Date: 12/5/2013 5:31:00 PM
This is great very funny enjoyed it alot thanks for the laughter. and your comments. cheri
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Date: 12/4/2013 12:37:00 PM
tim!.. you're a member of the brady bunch?..i find this totally entertaining and sweetly devilish.. soupy mail!
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Date: 12/4/2013 8:44:00 AM
Hi Tim -- Oh to be understood. Great. I've got to check these constests out (most seem too comlicated to attempt - too many rules, notes. lvoe, Kathy
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Date: 12/4/2013 7:51:00 AM
Oh Tim....you so remind me of the people I hang out with....:-) :-) :-) :-) thanks for the smile this morning
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Date: 12/4/2013 3:17:00 AM
a good one Tim.(: ) Jenish.
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Date: 12/2/2013 9:18:00 AM
Ha ha, love it.
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Date: 12/1/2013 9:41:00 PM
Enjoyed the write yellow with humor, Tim
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Date: 12/1/2013 8:42:00 PM
Adorable, Tim! You put a smile on my face tonight. I tried to write for this contest but came up colorless. I think you've got a winner here. Love and blessings
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