Colourfication

“Come Spring – drench me with your colours”, you whispered
And then you started unfolding the secrets in front of me
Under the azure sky and amber sun
Your ivory skin dazzled my virgin eyes…
I want to paint your neck and your eyelashes in mauve
I don’t need to colour your crimson lips and jet hair
Let me draw marigold over the origin of elixir
I am going to paint your hands and legs with platinum
Let emerald play all over your body
And fuchsia be bloomed here and there
When I have completed my job, you called me to come closer
Amazed by your angelic beauty I was approaching …
In the middle, I stumbled and fell on the ground
Oh! My nose!
While opening my eyes, I found myself on the floor of my bedroom
Oh! My God!
I fell flat from my bed and it was a dream…


17.03.16

colours : azure, amber, ivory, mauve, crimson, jet, marigold, platinum, emerald and fuchsia.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/28/2016 12:12:00 AM
Bobby, Congratulations on your awesome "Colourfication Win." ~LINDA~
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/30/2016 12:12:00 PM
Thank you dear, Linda. XOXO, Bobby
Date: 3/22/2016 8:30:00 PM
Hi Bobby, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I do like it Bobby. I have had such dreams myself where i have landed on the floor. As always Bobby, i do like the touch of humour and i think your dream of colour is excellent. This piece goes into my faves....Vlad.
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/24/2016 8:40:00 AM
Haha ... it happens to many, dear Vlad, few acknowledge it. Thanks and hugs, Bobby
Date: 3/19/2016 8:40:00 AM
Such a colorful write ... And yes it's breathtaking too... This work looks like an inspired write... Stupendous...!!!
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/20/2016 8:52:00 AM
Thanks a lot , Red, for your visit and compliments. Hugs Bobby
Date: 3/17/2016 6:45:00 PM
this was a really cool poem to read, great imagination it shows!! with the line about the necks, just say "neck" I just know S.O will like this.
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/17/2016 8:46:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Andy, for your visit and compliments. Yes, I have corrected it, that was a typo, thanks for indicating the same. XOXO, Bobby
Date: 3/17/2016 6:43:00 AM
Really loved the ending. To me it makes a much more fun read and I believe poetry should be fun. Really enjoyed the read, Bobby. Peace my friend:)
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/17/2016 8:50:00 PM
LOL! In real life, things don't happen as we dream... so the ending. Thanks you so very much for your visit and compliments. Hugs, Bobby
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