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Colors Pour Out

The sky swallows days..
                       
                                                    Exploding colors pour out..

                                                      A cool breeze sings low..

"Haiku me some nature,please"
a constest sponsored by Constance
 wriiten by Michael J Falotico

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/6/2011 8:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Constance La France's "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/5/2011 11:32:00 PM

Fine haiku - you stuck to the 5 7 5 format which is excellent. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/5/2011 12:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" poetry contest sponsored by Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~.

Judy Ball

Date: 9/5/2011 12:07:00 PM

Excellent Michael. Congrats. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2011 8:22:00 PM

hhmmm, this was one of the really good ones in the contest! Anyway, congrats on the top ten!

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/4/2011 2:45:00 PM

Congrats, Michael! Kim

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/4/2011 2:37:00 PM

I like that - "The sky swallows days" a great phrase. congratulations on your win!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 9/4/2011 9:43:00 AM

Congrats, Dear Michael. See, i could sense the winning character here... hahaha. Dinda

Jack Horne

Date: 9/4/2011 9:05:00 AM

Many congrats, Michael : )

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/4/2011 7:59:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest,Michael

David Williams

Date: 9/4/2011 5:14:00 AM

hey Michael congrats on your great win..David

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/4/2011 3:25:00 AM

divine, micahel!...sweet cheers to you for placing real well on the winning chart! :)huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/3/2011 11:24:00 PM

Congrats Michael luv on your wonderful winning poem so stunning in this contest.. very vibrant.. your J.G. in enjoyment mode luv..xoxo..

Dinda Minardi

Date: 9/3/2011 10:30:00 AM

The sky swallows days and pour them into colorful lives. I enjoyed this one very much. Goodluck in the contest and many thanx for my placement in your contest. I feel honored, :)

James Fraser

Date: 9/3/2011 8:22:00 AM

Fine entry Michael, indeed the colours do pour out. Good luck in the contest. Have a lovely weekend :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/2/2011 10:00:00 PM

wowie zowie, this is what haiku is all about!!gorgeous image AND thought.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/2/2011 7:20:00 PM

soft lovely words Michael luv and oh have missed your soft lovely words luv... great title to set the wonderful imagery of this piece ..good luck in the contest ... kisses returned double ..xoxoxo..thankxx so very much for my 2nd place in your contest .. now what happened to those Jets last night? I just could not watch the game even with second string playing when boo birds win..oh..hope they are better in regular play luv.. J.G. in happy mode.. now u have returned..luv..