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Began this earthly journey with an empty mind, then, my gray matter started accepting all kinds of information; often me, and my mind have a long conversation, and when I want to create- my MUSE will do a search and find. Inside my head the good and bad are entwined, sometimes, this girl's thinking has a swirling, whirling sensation; and words just come tumbling out in any situation, and I think- oh, these words of mine are unkind. I say to self- what a waste of brain power, I would like to revamp the burden of my useless thinking; when sometimes, my words need a shower. When I say things stupid or rude I can feel my soul sinking, but I have found meditation- where I drift in nature and flower; where only rainbow thoughts I am drinking. ________________________ April 12, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/Colors of My Thinking Copyright Protected, ID 18-1012-294-02 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Screwed XVIII sponsor, Rob Carmack Tenth Place ________________________________ Written for the contest, Changing the Mind's Diaper, Judged May 4/18, N/A

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Date: 5/11/2018 7:42:00 AM
I am in love with your last two lines. The whole piece wholly relatable and beautifully penned. I n/a'd in that one too but really pleased with what I wrote. Thank you for this sip of your rainbow thoughts. Congratulations on your win! xomo <3
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Date: 5/10/2018 11:07:00 PM
Lovely introspection, BW. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/12/2018 9:53:00 AM
when sometimes my words need a shower. And the end - with only beautiful thoughts drinking Enjoyed! GL in contest!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/12/2018 10:09:00 AM
Kim, thank you. I like those lines too
Date: 4/12/2018 8:31:00 AM
lovely picture and a great poem Constance ... I love the spiritual ending of that final stanza but i can't imagine you saying things stupid or rude!:-) good luck with the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 4/12/2018 10:09:00 AM
Jan thank you. True, I seldom let anger pass my lips. I have learned to live in serenity

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