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Colors of My Mind

The colors of my mind Collide in conversation But all I see Is black and white Thoughts so empty That feeling should Not be there And yet I still shed tears Unknown to myself why Loss,love,hate,loneliness Idled Truths of past reason False hope and gutless actions Limitless but not limited too Pain,sorrow,love, guilt

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Alex Anonymous

Date: 12/15/2017 5:08:00 PM

This is very beautiful. A lot of mixed emotion of different levels of pain. Very well written :) -AA

Tanesha Wells

Date: 12/10/2017 7:34:00 PM

Very touching poem. Short, strong and intense. Well written, I am impressed with how you articulated this poem with so much emotion and compassion.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 12/10/2017 12:17:00 PM

Nicely done :)

Jerry Bolton

Date: 12/10/2017 11:25:00 AM

"Thoughts so empty That feeling should Not be there" Those three lines are there and will remain there forever for some of us. Life can certainly be cruel.

Alan L Boles

Date: 8/23/2016 5:34:00 PM

excellent

Vidal Tan

Date: 8/23/2016 5:00:00 PM

Oops i never rated it. Max 7!

Vidal Tan

Date: 8/23/2016 4:59:00 PM

Love this poem. But i do recommend the first line to be same as title because it has better rhythm and makes it more introspective. The colors of my mind collide in conversation. That's just beautiful. Ima tattoo it. Great job!

Jessica Zorn
Date: 8/24/2016 12:55:00 PM

Jessica Zorn
Date: 8/24/2016 12:54:00 PM

Thank u that's what it was supposed to be. Apparently I didn't proof read.