Jessica Zorn Poet Dramatic Verse

Colors of My Mind

The colors of my mind
  Collide in conversation 
   But all I see
   Is black and white
   Thoughts so empty 
    That feeling should 
      Not be there 
        And yet I still shed tears 
       Unknown to myself why 
        Loss,love,hate,loneliness 
         Idled Truths of past reason
          False hope and gutless actions
           Limitless but not limited too
           Pain,sorrow,love, guilt

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Alexandria Grace December 15, 2017 at 5:08 PM This is very beautiful. A lot of mixed emotion of different levels of pain. Very well written :) -AA

Tanesha Wells December 10, 2017 at 7:34 PM Very touching poem. Short, strong and intense. Well written, I am impressed with how you articulated this poem with so much emotion and compassion.

Debbie Duncan December 10, 2017 at 12:17 PM Nicely done :)

Jerry Bolton December 10, 2017 at 11:25 AM "Thoughts so empty That feeling should Not be there" Those three lines are there and will remain there forever for some of us. Life can certainly be cruel.

Alan L Boles August 23, 2016 at 5:34 PM excellent

Vidal Tan August 23, 2016 at 5:00 PM Oops i never rated it. Max 7!

Vidal Tan August 23, 2016 at 4:59 PM Love this poem. But i do recommend the first line to be same as title because it has better rhythm and makes it more introspective. The colors of my mind collide in conversation. That's just beautiful. Ima tattoo it. Great job! Jessica Zorn August 24, 2016 at 12:55 PM Jessica Zorn August 24, 2016 at 12:54 PM Thank u that's what it was supposed to be. Apparently I didn't proof read.