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Colors of Love

Written: October 25 2024 for Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tom Woody
--------------------------------------------------- Thrilling and alluring hazard, affection, zeal, and heat all the stated above crimson, as a rose, is a sign of love at all times evolving when planets are aligned color doesn't matter because true love is blind unseen for the most break but only when glimpsed mutable and undulating colors are shifting lasts only long enough to be outrageous love is a colorless mood It is a heartfelt emotion our eyes grasp everything love stems from inclusion. She hates frilly pink stuff flavor, spice, everything squeamish three sons and spouse she shares blue but shuns others. once drove a crimson race car. young passion, now a yellow SUV. easy access and exit. deeply anchored, like her life. Experts called her Autumn, but what do they gasp? to me, she’s summer, colors bright and warm, at times a little dusty, like a sunlit kitchen. so color her something, it would just be opal— a humble stone, but look deeply, all the colors of the rainbow explode from its heart. When I am missing her: I am just cobalt blue, with emptiness... when we are intimate: I am a royal purple, with happiness... when I am working: I am anxiously green, with jealously... when she is sick: I am indigo, with hopefulness... Pleated, flirtatious hair. release her loose braids. with freckled cheeks. She vibrates sweetly. the furious downpour. moistens dusty roads. falling cobalt beads pitter. rainy beat orchestra. 1st place contest winner.

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Date: 11/10/2024 6:28:00 AM
This is a favorite, Lasaad! Loved the revealing of Autumn! Hugs! Hope you are well!
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Date: 11/3/2024 9:38:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. Your "Colors of Love" is wonderful. I enjoyed reading your write again. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
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Date: 11/2/2024 4:28:00 AM
Dr Sotto, youve written one that resonates with me on so many levels, true love and colors of love youve described and defined in such a philosophical manner! I also love the way youv arranged lines and also how youve written every line in this speaks to my soul in such a touching manner! I especially love “ love is a colorless mood It is a heartfelt emotion our eyes grasp everything love stems from inclusion.” YES! I agree! FAVE this is! Congratulations on your win
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Date: 10/28/2024 11:56:00 AM
So utterly delightful and very romantic, Lasaad! Eloquent use of color - so visual and ultimately a visceral experience of love. Love your word pairings, "colorless mood," "falling cobalt beads," "royal purple with happiness!" Such vivid images carry each line with lyrical artistry! Best wishes for a win, dear friend! Blessings!
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Date: 10/27/2024 9:59:00 AM
The contrast in this poem is of a high degree. Best for a win.
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Date: 10/26/2024 11:35:00 AM
Perfect chosen words to convey the "Colors of love" love how you gave examples of color moods such as blue when your missing her. An exceptional creative theme Lasaad that only a thoughtful imagination such as your creative gifts can share and bestow to the reader. Enjoy reading my friend. I have to catch up on your wonderful Poetry Lasaad. Thank you for your effort in writing and sharing. A favorite...
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Date: 10/25/2024 4:47:00 PM
How do you get better than this?! This is breathtaking work, Sotto. :) A fav for me...just wooow
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Date: 10/25/2024 10:41:00 AM
Your "Colors of Love" is wonderful from the first line to the last line. It is great to see you here. Hope you can write more... "Good Luck" Have a blessed Autumn day/weekend.............
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