Colors of Fall

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                                               Triple string of pearls
                                       Crinolin puffed green ballgown
                                           Pampas grass fall's grace
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Knop Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 9:02 AM
You painted a vivid picture with your Haiku, Sara! Enjoyed the read. And thank you for commenting on "Nightly Whisper". Have a great week ahead...Gert
Chu Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 9:51 AM
scratch nature, you have that =)
Chu Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 9:50 AM
Very descriptive and inspiring, but where's the nature and moment =(
Mehta Avatar
September 8, 2010 at 6:20 AM
You have painted a very nice picture of the colorful Fall with apt images, sara
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 9:03 PM
Lovely and colorful haiku there! Luv, Andrea
Taylor Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 7:12 PM
Great haiku, Sara. Enjoyed. All the best to you and Tommy. In my prayers. xxx Ralph
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September 7, 2010 at 5:01 PM
Vibrant and beautiful Sara ... enjoyed your colors of fall... how is your Tommy doing?luv..
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September 7, 2010 at 1:26 PM
Beautiful imag of the pampas flowers (pearls) and ballgown, Sara. Very creative. Prayers for Tommy Jr. Continue! Love, Carolyn
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