Colors of Fall

. Triple string of pearls Crinolin puffed green ballgown Pampas grass fall's grace

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/12/2010 9:02:00 AM

You painted a vivid picture with your Haiku, Sara! Enjoyed the read. And thank you for commenting on "Nightly Whisper". Have a great week ahead...Gert

Hyle Chu

Date: 9/11/2010 9:51:00 AM

scratch nature, you have that =)

Hyle Chu

Date: 9/11/2010 9:50:00 AM

Very descriptive and inspiring, but where's the nature and moment =(

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/8/2010 6:20:00 AM

You have painted a very nice picture of the colorful Fall with apt images, sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/7/2010 9:03:00 PM

Lovely and colorful haiku there! Luv, Andrea

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/7/2010 7:12:00 PM

Great haiku, Sara. Enjoyed. All the best to you and Tommy. In my prayers. xxx Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/7/2010 5:01:00 PM

Vibrant and beautiful Sara ... enjoyed your colors of fall... how is your Tommy doing?luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/7/2010 1:26:00 PM

Beautiful imag of the pampas flowers (pearls) and ballgown, Sara. Very creative. Prayers for Tommy Jr. Continue! Love, Carolyn