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COLORS IN THE SKY

"Two doves in white flying, feathers glow beneath the morning's rainbow colors" QUOTE BY CHARLES MESSINA Drizzles of soft rain were falling, against the sun, they're glittering; Somewhere across the horizon, shades of lovely colors were born. Morning sun was shining so bright filling the hearts with deep delight, and to the morning's grand adorn, two beating faithful hearts were sworn. Then under the vibrant rainbow, two doves were flying, white as snow, across the sky, they were soaring, with pristine bright souls shimmering. Then the two hearts that unleashed them sailed together to live their dream; The glow of the blissful morning gave them hope for bright beginning. No. 1272 poetry contest 5th place Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 1/9/2024 2:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 1/9/2024 7:02:00 PM
Thank you very much... I felt I needed to refine it for the contest...
Date: 12/12/2022 12:20:00 PM
Hello Roger Carvis, A beautiful poem about the sky. i enjoyed it. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/13/2022 4:01:00 AM
YOu are very welcome. Merry Christmas. Hugs / Darlene
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 12/12/2022 5:01:00 PM
Thank you very much...
Date: 12/8/2022 2:13:00 PM
Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Sara
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 12/8/2022 8:13:00 PM
Thank you very much... Learning in progress
Date: 12/8/2022 9:31:00 AM
"shades of color were born" - such a lovely sight! Congratulations on your win Roger! :)
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 12/8/2022 9:49:00 AM
Thank you very much... It depicts how rainbow is created... Congratulations too...
Date: 12/6/2022 4:15:00 AM
Roger, my friend, your talent is amazing, and your English is so evocative and flowing!!! please keep the good poesy shining !!!!! good luck in the challenge..
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 12/6/2022 10:02:00 AM
Thank you my friend...
Date: 12/5/2022 11:20:00 PM
Beautiful:)
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 12/6/2022 3:35:00 AM
Thank you very much...

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