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Coloring Our Dream World

Puffy Clouds,Wet Rain,
Sunshines ,Everynow and then,
'Gotta Catch that Spell'
beaming in a Girl's Sweet Smile,
Painting Rainbows ,Just for You.





Charma

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Painted Hunter

April 3, 2013 at 10:07 AM

A beautiful lighthearted gem, Charma!

Matthew Anish

January 28, 2010 at 2:56 PM

A nice break from winter blues. Sweet words Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

James Marshall Goff

January 28, 2010 at 4:17 AM

wonderfully Charma! greetings my friend! my computer is broken, so I have limited time on-line, will be getting new in 3-4wks! I always think you are the greatest Charmaine! much love...jimbo

Joshua Lacey

January 19, 2010 at 1:14 PM

cute poem :)

James Marshall Goff

January 16, 2010 at 2:15 PM

love the energy and sweetness that is Charma in this sharp form! Jimbo

Carrie Richards

January 15, 2010 at 4:33 PM

So cheerful and uplifting, and just what a girl needs to read on a gray, foggy, wet day!! Thank you, Charmaine!! :)

Gert W. Knop

January 15, 2010 at 4:36 AM

Hi Charma, can see the rainbow you've painted here in your Tanka. Thank you always for your comments..Gert

January 11, 2010 at 2:12 PM

You have me smiling with your words. Thank you for sharing this uplifting poem with us. Keep on writing. Karen

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

January 10, 2010 at 12:13 AM

I love the rainbow imagery. I'm pretty new to poetrysoup and like what I see so far! Sincerely Scarlett

Carolyn Devonshire

January 9, 2010 at 8:11 AM

Your poems always paint rainbows, my dear! What a joy it is to read your work again. I hope you had wonderful holidays and look forward to reading more of your poetry throughout the new year! Love, Carolyn

James Peranteau

January 9, 2010 at 7:45 AM

Charmaine,....very cute poem ! I love your visual here Charmaine,...as if I was in the painting !!! james

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

January 8, 2010 at 11:08 PM

Cool write! Charma! Great imagery. A well written Tanka. Thanks for sharing. Happy new year! Caroline.

John Freeman

January 8, 2010 at 7:18 PM

Lovely write Charmaine, your beaming your sweet girl's style. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Eleanore Bourner

January 8, 2010 at 5:27 PM

:) sugar&spice&everythingnice! little girls and boys are soo sweet! good luck! ------Ell

Edward Orozco

January 8, 2010 at 4:23 PM

Amazing piece! - edward

Sara Kendrick

January 8, 2010 at 3:30 PM

That is some more girl that has rainbow smile. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work and for the kind comments on Cody's poem. Sara

John Loving Iii

January 8, 2010 at 3:15 PM

your my pot o gold at the end of that rainbow. jhl

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