Notes About The Poem

- Colorful World -

Together we shall embrace heaven,
                                          the stars and the moon
                                Even if ice drifts through our dreams
                                           Yesterday is gone ___
                                       drowned in snow wet words
                      Never forget the cheerful spring streams of childhood
                                       ~ glittering silver threads ~

                       The memories are life, the longing belongs to death
                            The cross on the wall has been painted white
                     Knowledge is a conscious understanding of "something"
                                  It does not have to be that difficult
                                     ________ our daily challenges
                                     ____ TOGETHER - A TOTAL UNIT
                                   a world in the colors of the rainbow





                                                   18/01/2021
                                           Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
                                     Copyright © All Rights Reserved

                                           "Unity" Poetry Contest
                                   Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire
                                            3rd place in the contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Schiavina Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 7:40 AM
Congratulations Anne- Lise on a unique beautiful poem with colors and emotions.
Andresen Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 7:43 AM
- Thank you very much for visit and congratulations, Frances :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 1:44 PM
A universal consciousness. So true. It was lovely to meet you on this side of heaven Anne-Lise. Well done on your placement.
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 8:07 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Koplin Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 8:40 PM
Amen! I love it! Congrats on your win!
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 8:05 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Goldsmith Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 11:49 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love your write, picture and butterfly. "Wonderful" Have a blessed day..................
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 8:04 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 6:32 AM
Well written Anne-Lise. I enjoyed this. I hope you have a nice day :)
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 11:27 AM
- Thank you very much, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devonshire Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 4:59 AM
We do need to see the beauty of all races, Sunshine, and appreciate our "colorful" diversity. I hope we can reach that type of unity one day. Nicely penned! Congrats on your place in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 8:06 AM
- Thank you very much for my place on your winning list, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 2:40 PM
your pen sparkles in the arc of this beautifully painted piece
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 8:07 AM
- Liam, thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 5:22 AM
The thought of a rainbow world! Beautiful!
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 8:06 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ball Avatar
January 19, 2021 at 2:13 PM
Well said Anne-Lise. Rainbows and butterflies, my two favorite things. Love this. God Bless, JB
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 8:01 AM
- Judy, thank you very much for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 9:36 PM
Yes one does sense a realm of unity..love this poem, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 8:01 AM
- Thank you very much Harry, for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 1:07 PM
A world of harmony and love painted in the colors of a rainbow! Wonderfully written dearest, Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx
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January 20, 2021 at 8:00 AM
- Demrtrios, thank you very much for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 12:54 PM
a lovely message Anne-Lise the ending is so uplifting and one of hope, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 8:00 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 11:53 AM
What a lovely picture, a gif. Your poem speaks volumes. Would we find serenity. ~~
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January 20, 2021 at 8:00 AM
- Thank you very much Victor, for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 11:00 AM
There is so much on this beautiful world that unites us yet many don't share that vision that most of us have. We live in hope Anne, Have a great week. Tom
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January 20, 2021 at 7:59 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 18, 2021 at 10:27 AM
It is indeed a colourful world, in that we are united. A lovely write and a gorgeous picture Anne-Lise... Belle
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 7:59 AM
- Belle, thank you very much for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 9:22 AM
You are so right, Anne-Lise--it does not have to be that difficult. Great message of unity.
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 7:59 AM
- Thank you very much Vijay, for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Logan Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 7:59 AM
There is often a sense of unity without a word being spoken. Watching a rainbow, a fast moving stream that looks like silver threads. I really like your thoughts in these lines, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 7:58 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 7:41 AM
I love this. It's a glorious write worthy of a win. Best wishes for a win and Love to you. God bless you always
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 7:58 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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