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Colorful Understanding

The words fall like leaves They twirl in the air They land on ground, not paper Someone understands... Heidi Sands 9/30/22

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Date: 10/2/2022 8:38:00 AM
Witty and pretty, dearest, Heidi. Be blessed!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/2/2022 11:16:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios :)
Date: 10/2/2022 6:51:00 AM
- Absolutely, Heidi :) - hugs
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Date: 10/2/2022 7:28:00 AM
Thank you Anne - Lise. Hugs :)
Date: 10/2/2022 6:40:00 AM
Heidi, I think is it so clever and beautiful in the way you constructed this one! Someone will understand! Happy Sunday!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/2/2022 7:27:00 AM
Thanks so much Mike! Happy Sunday :)
Date: 10/1/2022 4:37:00 AM
Minimal that is the maximum in poetry... so write your dear poet... salute. alkas
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/1/2022 5:54:00 AM
Thank you Alkas. It is nice to see to see your comment :)
Date: 9/30/2022 3:41:00 PM
words can be so powerful, so healing, especially when they fall softly on the heart, nice one dear Heidi
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Date: 9/30/2022 3:44:00 PM
Yes they certainly can. Thank you for your kind input :)
Date: 9/30/2022 12:11:00 PM
I love this poem Heidi. It is so beautifully written. With awareness and understanding. A fave, Heidi!
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Date: 9/30/2022 12:20:00 PM
Thank you so much Sandy. I am grateful for the Fave too :)
Date: 9/30/2022 11:58:00 AM
Meaningful metaphoric write, Heidi. Nice to have someone who understands. Much is said sometimes by the unsaid.
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Date: 9/30/2022 12:20:00 PM
Exactly Vijay. You get it. Thank you for your kind comment :)
Date: 9/30/2022 11:38:00 AM
Sometimes the muse just twirls aroung, Very nicely expressed Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/30/2022 11:55:00 AM
Yes , it can. Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 9/30/2022 11:17:00 AM
A very nice thought . . . .Aloha!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/30/2022 11:55:00 AM
Thank you Rico. Nice to see you :)
Date: 9/30/2022 10:40:00 AM
So well expressed in such graphic images that we are brought to a new understanding through your poem. Well done Heidi. Enjoyed.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/30/2022 11:07:00 AM
Thank you Sam. I am happy you enjoyed it. I like your comment :)
Date: 9/30/2022 7:13:00 AM
Falling words someone surely understands. Well stated, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/30/2022 8:25:00 AM
Thank you Subimal. It is nice to see your comment :)
Date: 9/30/2022 6:05:00 AM
Absolutely true and very well expressed Heidi, but no one understands...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/30/2022 6:21:00 AM
Thank you Sotto. I appreciate your comment. You are right , often no one understands. Take care :)

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