Heidi Sands Poet Pantoum

Colorful Flare

They zoom in flight, buzzing through the air
Tiny hummingbirds are darting all around
To the sugar feeder with colorful flare
Swooping, without landing on the ground

Tiny hummingbirds are darting all around
Territorial chirps at one another in flight
Swooping, without landing on the ground
It is a swarm of such a beautiful sight

Territorial chirps at one another in flight
To the sugar feeder with colorful flare
It is a swarm of such a beautiful sight
They zoom in flight, buzzing through the air

Heidi Sands

8/18/19

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Janice Canerdy August 20, 2019 at 2:55 PM This is lovely, Heidi--made me smile. Janice Heidi Sands August 20, 2019 at 3:04 PM Thank you Janice. I am happy to hear it made you smile :)

Nette Onclaud August 19, 2019 at 5:06 PM such a poetic delight, heidi... nature becomes you!...huggs Heidi Sands August 19, 2019 at 6:26 PM Thank you Nette! Nice to see your comment tonight :)

Chris Green August 19, 2019 at 12:55 PM Really nice Heidi. I love watching the hummingbirds come to my feeders. They are amazing little creatures. Heidi Sands August 19, 2019 at 1:43 PM Thank you Chris! I love watching them too. Today, they are fighting quite a bit though. Screaming, I'd say. They are so territorial. I usually have 2 feeders. This time I only have 1. I appreciate your comment :)

Anne-Lise Andresen August 19, 2019 at 8:02 AM - Heidi, thank you for this beautiful poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Heidi Sands August 19, 2019 at 8:09 AM You are welcome and thank you for your visit and comment Anne-Lise :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy August 19, 2019 at 2:53 AM Lovely! Heidi Sands August 19, 2019 at 8:08 AM Thank you Abdullah :)

Vijay Pandit August 18, 2019 at 9:29 PM Lovely sights and sounds of hummingbirds.. well written poem, Heidi. Heidi Sands August 19, 2019 at 8:08 AM Thank you Vijay! :)

Gershon Wolf August 18, 2019 at 8:56 PM Indeed, a lovely pantoum, Heidi! :) gw Heidi Sands August 19, 2019 at 8:08 AM Thank you Gershon :)

Arturo Michael August 18, 2019 at 6:45 PM Lovely...Lucky hummers they have a feeder...with feed...I would chirp, this belongs to me too... Heidi Sands August 18, 2019 at 7:05 PM Yes, they are happy and lucky, just a bit competitive with each other. Thanks for your sweet comment Arturo :)

Jeanne Mcgee August 18, 2019 at 3:29 PM I love how this came together using the pantoum form. Cute little guys, I can just see them swooping in. Heidi Sands August 18, 2019 at 4:46 PM Thank you Jeanne :)

Silent One August 18, 2019 at 1:27 PM One of my favourite forms and you did it very well.. Heidi Sands August 18, 2019 at 2:38 PM Thank you Silent one. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Tom Cunningham August 18, 2019 at 12:29 PM Well written pantoum Heidi, have only written one and found it a struggle, in fact computer nearly went out the window lol. Tom Heidi Sands August 18, 2019 at 1:00 PM Hi Tom. LOL I know what that is like. I went through an experience like that with a pantoum once ! This one came easier for some reason, but I followed the instructions as best I could from the site. Hopefully it is right lol. Thanks for your comment :)

Joseph May August 18, 2019 at 11:37 AM Wonderful write about these beautiful birds Heidi...Best wishes Heidi Sands August 18, 2019 at 11:39 AM Thank you Joseph :)