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Colorful Flare

They zoom in flight, buzzing through the air Tiny hummingbirds are darting all around To the sugar feeder with colorful flare Swooping, without landing on the ground Tiny hummingbirds are darting all around Territorial chirps at one another in flight Swooping, without landing on the ground It is a swarm of such a beautiful sight Territorial chirps at one another in flight To the sugar feeder with colorful flare It is a swarm of such a beautiful sight They zoom in flight, buzzing through the air Heidi Sands 8/18/19

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/20/2019 2:55:00 PM

This is lovely, Heidi--made me smile. Janice

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/20/2019 3:04:00 PM

Thank you Janice. I am happy to hear it made you smile :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/19/2019 5:06:00 PM

such a poetic delight, heidi... nature becomes you!...huggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/19/2019 6:26:00 PM

Thank you Nette! Nice to see your comment tonight :)

Chris Green

Date: 8/19/2019 12:55:00 PM

Really nice Heidi. I love watching the hummingbirds come to my feeders. They are amazing little creatures.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/19/2019 1:43:00 PM

Thank you Chris! I love watching them too. Today, they are fighting quite a bit though. Screaming, I'd say. They are so territorial. I usually have 2 feeders. This time I only have 1. I appreciate your comment :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2019 8:02:00 AM

- Heidi, thank you for this beautiful poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/19/2019 8:09:00 AM

You are welcome and thank you for your visit and comment Anne-Lise :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/19/2019 2:53:00 AM

Lovely!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/19/2019 8:08:00 AM

Thank you Abdullah :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/18/2019 9:29:00 PM

Lovely sights and sounds of hummingbirds.. well written poem, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/19/2019 8:08:00 AM

Thank you Vijay! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/18/2019 8:56:00 PM

Indeed, a lovely pantoum, Heidi! :) gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/19/2019 8:08:00 AM

Thank you Gershon :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/18/2019 6:45:00 PM

Lovely...Lucky hummers they have a feeder...with feed...I would chirp, this belongs to me too...

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2019 7:05:00 PM

Yes, they are happy and lucky, just a bit competitive with each other. Thanks for your sweet comment Arturo :)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/18/2019 3:29:00 PM

I love how this came together using the pantoum form. Cute little guys, I can just see them swooping in.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2019 4:46:00 PM

Thank you Jeanne :)

Silent One

Date: 8/18/2019 1:27:00 PM

One of my favourite forms and you did it very well..

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2019 2:38:00 PM

Thank you Silent one. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/18/2019 12:29:00 PM

Well written pantoum Heidi, have only written one and found it a struggle, in fact computer nearly went out the window lol. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2019 1:00:00 PM

Hi Tom. LOL I know what that is like. I went through an experience like that with a pantoum once ! This one came easier for some reason, but I followed the instructions as best I could from the site. Hopefully it is right lol. Thanks for your comment :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/18/2019 11:37:00 AM

Wonderful write about these beautiful birds Heidi...Best wishes

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2019 11:39:00 AM

Thank you Joseph :)