Colorful Fall

Carnelian and crimsons orchestrate eye music
Ornate as orange oboes that blare a fiery woo 
Loud in the hills, flaring flutes of maroon thrill,
Oscillating in burgundy trills of a breezy banjo
Red rises in volumes that the silent trees hear,
For they farewell warmth, in sun-setting relief,  
Undulating in vermillion wavelengths an adieu,
Lingering long in mellowing yellows, autumnal

Free leaves wind-whorl a gold saxophone-puff
As apples blush in whistles of a taupe wisteria
Looping branches bare-brown in tuned annual
Love-fest festooned in earthen melody eternal

(9/14/18)
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Sambourne Avatar
November 3, 2021 at 9:05 PM
Back for another read. So many exceptional word combinations that grasp timely prints of fall. "Free leaves ... a gold saxophone-puff" - strong, memorable image. Congratulations on a superb write! Brian
Woodrow Avatar
November 4, 2021 at 7:33 AM
Thank you :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 2:05 PM
The first thoughts that came to my mind were this is so outstanding and then I glanced down at read Andrea‘s comment and saw we both feel the same about your gorgeous acrostic. I am putting this into my faves Susan! Autumn sings its own arrival in whispers of the wind. Beautiful! I hope this is a top winner for you. Blessings xxoo
Woodrow Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 3:54 PM
Thank you very much Connie.. glad you liked it :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 3:07 PM
outstanding imagery, Susan. Off the charts!!!
Woodrow Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 8:34 PM
Thanks Andrea :)
Green Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 9:27 AM
A wonderful musical ode to fall...I love the melodies of Autumn.
Woodrow Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 1:20 PM
Thank you, Chris :)
Horsman Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 2:28 AM
Wow, love this orchestration of the season Autumn. Clever theme, beautiful poetry.
Woodrow Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 12:36 PM
Thank you Harry :)
Sambourne Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 8:13 PM
What a fine poem to highlight autumn's glossy show. Stellar imagery. Enjoyed it immensely! Reads like a winner to me. Best wishes, Brian
Woodrow Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 12:36 PM
Thank you Brian :)
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