Colorful Dreams

Very colorful dreams 
flowing into my head carefree
like fleeting butterflies
catchin’ the light onto the sun
over the azure sky outlined.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Jones Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 7:38 AM
Dorian, this is a beautifully penned Tanka. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
Bolton Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 8:57 AM
How I love this little full-of-life poem. Simple, but straight-forward expressions of wonderful visions. The butterfly line made me smile.
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 3:29 PM
Thank you Jerry for your wonderful comment!love and light! xxxx D
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