Colorful Affair

In the front seat of the train ... I saw her ...
      Painted hair, stunning look ...
      She saw me, and said:
     - Pleasure, I'm a blue waste ...!
     I confess I did not notice any waste ...
     Pink cheeks, piercing eyes
     mouth painted ... dazzling I would say ...
   "Pleasure," I said.
   - You know the "red menace"?
   Ah! This has already passed ...
   - Well, and "yellow fever"!?
   - This is under control ...
   - And "green revolution"! ?
   Ah! This is what I hope ...
   Ah! finally ... you found me ...
     It's me ... I came to revolutionize your life!
   She invents names to sing me, to
   conquer me ... who am i ...?
    - Pleasure again ... is your name ...?
    - No, I am, green revolution ... I liked it
       Of you, let's get hitched ...!
     Dumb, I received a tremendous kiss ...
      fainted ,,, he kissed me again ...
      I fell asleep
     "You know, I liked you," she said when I woke up.
     - You just ...? I love you ...!
     - It's that you are so colorful ... I am ... I went
       always so pale in life ... page
       in blank... !
     - Let's write this book with love ...
        Let's paint the newer world ... come on!
     And so she took me into her life ....
     Colorful  brand new life ...
     She is now, fertile green field ... I
     fertile green the sower ...!
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Date: 4/30/2019 4:52:00 PM
Hello Alkas Poetry, this poem is wonderful. As I was reading this poem, I felt like I was there. Your great friend. Darlene
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Date: 4/27/2019 10:39:00 AM
FANTASTIC ALKAS!!! Another, at least for me, time travel/ages passing/past colors blending together into the present; where all the world is green. I think you would listening to a Tom Waits song "All the World is Green". If you haven't heard it already. In Waits you will also find an ancient one.
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Date: 4/27/2019 11:10:00 PM
So very cool Alkas!!!
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Date: 4/27/2019 6:35:00 PM
THANK YOU LORD COLOR LORD RAINBOW I LIKE TOM WAITS AND OTHERS WHO HAVE POETRY SO LOU REED, VELVET UNDERGROUND .... AND SO. LIKE THIS...   SALUTE ALKAS.
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