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Saturday, September 2, 2023
Colorful Or Chimera Words- Update Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

"I loved her more than she'll ever realize." _by Poet I'm running on a rainbow hoping to reach the end where I will soon find you my longest and deepest friend Beneath me are the most vibrant colors that are so colorful to my feet they are offset by the misty air which feels so cool and neat I make my climb through the arch at it's highest peak it is only for true love that I desperately seek will you be there for me when I make my way down will you be my golden treasure without a passing frown I'm running on a rainbow hoping to reach the end where I will soon find you my longest and deepest friend

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/5/2023 7:56:00 AM

So glad Kacey inspired you to write this Robert. Classy. :)

Ink Empress

Date: 9/3/2023 7:09:00 AM

Wow this is soul warming and so moving! You are truly a very wonderful friend, evident here too. I love the way you’ve written this and expressed here. The opening really drew me in, how imaginative and artistic is that “ im running on a rainbow” i love that! Truly you have a melody in your mind always i think, as this lyrical piece is truly so mellifluous and captivating. The kind of song i would love to listen to all day. Brilliant write. So soulful. I enjoyed reading this

Robert James Liguori
Date: 9/3/2023 9:19:00 AM

Wow. At least a dozen compliments you gave me there. You are a very special person. Thank you. I enjoyed writing this poem.