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"Colorful language is the best way to recreate the incident as it happened and to picture it for the audience". Dale Carnegie
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O, colors, enthrall us through their splendor Infuse the mundane world with vivid shades Dazzle with hues and send a melody so tender, No harp plays a role in tunes or serenades. Lush velvet stains lips and hands with blackberry Ripe grapes drenched in bright, blithesome lands A colorful kaleidoscope lies in a flower vase—airy, A sparkle that imbues the shadows and expands. Olive and amber—ripening akin to wheat, Grating upon nerves, a symphony so sweet I love color, from flaming reds to vivid greens. Royals flaunt purple, a sight that sheens. Flaming reds and vivid greens—I adore Royal flaunting purples, I simply can't ignore. If I were the color blue, I would sing a halcyon song. Leave you frantic—recalling your youth for days long. I hold my breath as sapphire skies spread. Vast quietude, serene—filling my head Rainbows, prisms—tinsel glitter galore, A wheat harvest of yellow—a sight to adore Ripples and runs—floats and flies, Subtle shades and sheen, colors that mesmerize. Crimson and azure—glowing with grace, The purity of white is a vague oasis to embrace. A streak of gray brought heaven to earth Crackled turquoise, vivid glow of calm sea worth, As a slow hawk stoops—prey in the deep, The sunflower droops; a lazy wave creeps. The wind sleeps—swirling in dazzling links, And loops, creating a symphony that never sinks The crickets chime their pauseless rhyme, And the colors run—toward the sun climb. Before the wind feet, in the wheat, they stun. The green of elms—a sage discourse troll, Hemlock green, oaks, and juniper trees spun, A color symphony, one actor—this world scrolls, A never-ending show of beauty and poetry. Crafting a lasting metaphor of beat and symmetry A magnificent show of shadows and brightness. O, hues, how you seduce my air with lightness.

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Date: 9/10/2023 11:18:00 PM
Sotto, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, love the image, music, and quote also, Constance
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Date: 9/11/2023 6:55:00 AM
Constance, I am deeply moved by your heartfelt praise and appreciation for my humble words. I am overwhelmed with a sense of gratitude and honor. I cannot express enough thanks for the kind and appreciative words you have bestowed upon me today. May God bless you abundantly. With warmest regards.
Date: 9/5/2023 9:07:00 PM
Back with congratulations. I enjoyed reading this one again. Another wonderful write/picture. Have a great day writing away............
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Date: 9/4/2023 9:58:00 PM
Im not sure where to begin praising this poem. Truly all the imagery you’ve painted here using colors and gems and how it flows is so soul warming and truly would make any reader go wow. I especially love how you mentioned wind sleeps, and crackled turquoise and so much more. Every line in this is just so very creatively crafted. One of my faves from you. Love it. Congratulations. Well deserved. You are so gifted.
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Date: 8/28/2023 2:37:00 PM
Nice depiction of colors Nd beauty and charm associated with it. Well done.
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Date: 8/27/2023 7:22:00 PM
Such a wonderful choice of colorful delights. I adore blackberries, flowers and Kaleidoscopes and sapphire skies, and oh I love blackberries, and crickets and elms and juniper, and did I mention I love blackberries? what a colorful poem ! Superb.
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Date: 8/27/2023 3:16:00 PM
My good friend this is another mind blowingly beautiful new creation from your golden pen. So many exceptional verses and imagery is terrific too. Another fav because this too is another gem. God bless you.
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Date: 8/27/2023 2:09:00 PM
Gosh- another terrific poem from you adorned with such creative talent. Your words, imagery are exquisite. I’m in awe with your immense ability to bring to life all that your golden pen touches Lassad. ‘And the colours run- towards the sun climb’ - glorious! Much praise and blessings to you and good luck!
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Date: 8/27/2023 1:03:00 PM
- This poem glows with grace and beauty, Las ... the colors described so passionately and dearly - Best wishes in the contest ... hope it will be a top winning poem :) - hugs
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Date: 8/27/2023 12:44:00 PM
Your "Colorful " is a wonderful write/pretty picture. "Good Luck" I also did Colorful. Have a great day/week writing away............
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Date: 8/27/2023 12:02:00 PM
A beautifully crafted piece Lasaad, so much more than just big brash attractive words that sound nice, but a meaningful verse, with deep colourful thought and metaphor throughout, never a mention of black, which rightly so, has no place to play in this one, always a pleasure to read your work, cheers David
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