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Colorfall

stained
beauty
the sun is
descending fast
shadows reveal a
purple martin plunging

fluttering like the wind
drifting in sunshine
petals dance too
it's autumn
shedding
trees


Written on 8/16/2021
For: Merse Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Malabika Ray Choudhury

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 8/24/2021 11:36:00 PM
Hello Evelyn ... wonderfully described and so easy to see your picture poem - thank you Evelyn - Lindsay
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/25/2021 10:14:00 AM
You are most welcome, Lindsay. Thank you so much for the encouraging words. :D
Date: 8/22/2021 6:05:00 PM
Gorgeous poem! God bless you!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/22/2021 6:30:00 PM
Thank you, and God bless you, too!
Date: 8/17/2021 5:21:00 PM
Evelyn, you have crafted a lovely poem. With magnificent imagery. Best wishes, my friend.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/17/2021 8:08:00 PM
Thank you for your valued comment, dear Lasaad. Have a nice evening.
Date: 8/17/2021 2:57:00 PM
Delightful Judy! Love the title and the way you flesh it out in your poetic picture framed in purple! All the best for a win! Blessings!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/17/2021 3:50:00 PM
Thank you, Sam. Your appreciation and confidence is gladdening. Blessings!
Date: 8/17/2021 6:09:00 AM
I love that purple martin plunging! Cool!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/17/2021 11:22:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kim.
Date: 8/17/2021 3:20:00 AM
- A wonderful dance in the wind, Evelyn :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/17/2021 11:25:00 AM
Thank you for the happy thoughts and well wishes, Anne-Lise. hugs, Evelyn :D
Date: 8/17/2021 2:42:00 AM
Magnificent imagery, to be expected from you. Best for a win.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/17/2021 11:27:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely words and vote of confidence. :D

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