Colorblind- For Contest

Black, white together just watching their lives go by, the sea colorblind

3/15/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 7:39 AM
What a beautiful imagery!!! Congrats Barbara,for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
Callus Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 2:32 PM
Your colourblind sea makes for creative thinking, Barbara! Well done! Congratulations on this deserved win....paul
Selfa Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 9:12 AM
Congratulations Barbara on your remarkable win. You never failed to write a jaw-dropping poem! You truly are praiseworthy! Keep up the good work and continue to enjoy the blessings of words and poetry. :) -HANS
Macfarlane Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 3:26 PM
Marvelous write and win Barbara. Hugs
A. Sharma Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 3:24 AM
Brilliant take Barbara.. congrats on big win!
Dietrich Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 12:36 PM
still loving this one. BIG congrats and happy Easter, dearie.
Raven Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 11:24 AM
Hi Barbara, Happy Easter, Congratulations on your win in the contest. This one sings into my faves.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 4:50 AM
Colorblind...Yes, I like that Barbara. Congratulations on your high placement!
A   Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 11:58 PM
Barbara, Congratulations on your awesome WIN. Thank you for supporting my one line verse contest. Stop by my latest blog "Do You See What I See? if you like." Happy Easter. Love LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 4:01 PM
wow, you REALLY did this well. So far it is one of the best ones I have seen (in my humble opinion)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 10:17 AM
You said a lot with a few words Barb.
Leiser Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 9:48 PM
I like your take on this, Barbara! Good luck in the contest:)
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