Colorado Poem

It’s oh so hot in this writer’s loft
My words are dripping, sliding
The heat depletes every ounce of thought
and dehydrates my writing

This pen, it sweats every word it gets
and drenches the sweltering journal 
but I’m determined to stay with my writing today 
in this endless, relentless inferno

…ten minutes ago the heat bothered me so
but now I hear thunder and lightening
So, I grab my notebook and my coat from the hook
I’ll continue to do some more writing

I best finish though, before rain turns to snow
I hear that this weather is fickle
Colorado’s like that - we learn to adapt
as the rain spatters down to a trickle

Oh wouldn’tcha know It’s starting to SNOW
I can’t do my writing in mittens!
Oh wait, it’s okay - the sun’s back this way
(with the heat that I’m sweet on forgettin’)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Valles Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 8:37 AM
Gayle, as a Colorado native this one really hit home. Beautiful write! Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Green Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 7:18 AM
Nice Gayle, as they say down here (and I'm sure in many places) if you don't like the weather in Texas, just wait a minute. This was wonderfully written with a nice bit of humor to fend off the forecast.
Soper Avatar
May 7, 2017 at 10:41 PM
A very enjoyable read, flowed well with great wit and observation. Well Done!
Rodd Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 5:46 AM
thx for reading, Joseph ;)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 7, 2017 at 3:59 PM
The changing ink of Colorado! Enjoyed, Gayle!
Rodd Avatar
May 7, 2017 at 4:29 PM
lol yeah, I think what they say about Colorado - if you don't like the weather, wait a minute!
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