Sutrisno Lie Poet Light Verse

Color of My Life

I'm thinking of letting go of something
Something bolding a colorless part of my life
Maybe i'm still so confused
Because that's something i've lived for.

Holding any branch
And stick it to ground
Drawing a colorless feeling
Just like waiting here for a confession.

I don't know what to do
To atone many mistakes
But i love to fill an octave color to my life
More colorful than a rainbow.

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Sutrisno Lie October 18, 2008 at 5:12 AM thanks a lot :)

Joseph Spence Sr October 16, 2008 at 10:54 AM I really like the flow of this poem and how it sticks with the title. I can see the images quite clearly. The ending stanza is beautiful with the illumination of the rainbow. Great job! ~Joseph