color

Day breaks in shadow
A silky grey moonlight fades
In an ocher mist
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Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 1:15 PM
Love this, John. The whole thing is so darn pretty.
Baker Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 8:51 PM
Nice Haiku, John. Unusual color there. Have a great week! Bill
Wolf Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 8:27 PM
Ocher-doker, John. ~ Play Misty for Me
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