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When Lonely Holds Lonely, Chances Are.... Love Dances!

Excuse me for asking, But I've noticed you passing... Your nights in here all alone, The streaks on your face... Are a dead give away.. That somewhere love has gone wrong. Well I've been there too... And I'm telling you... We might be two of a kind So I thought if I'd ask... You might wanna dance... If your blues are the color of mine! Chorus: If you've known lonely like I've known lonely... We've both been lonely too long! If you've been hurting like I've been hurting.... Let's let the last teardrop fall! What do we have to lose.... Just an hour or two... Who knows what we might find! Let's turn circumstance... Into romance.... If your blues are the color of mine! By Chuck Melugin Co write with: Big Kenny Alphin And Ryan Reynolds All rights reserved

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 9/16/2021 12:51:00 PM

Chuck, I’d love to hear this put to music. I’m sure many can relate, sure could have when ii was young. I’m happily married now, with of course the occasional hurts in that too. Keep up the great pen!

Chuck Melugin
Date: 10/1/2021 12:58:00 PM

Thanks so much Sally! Your words uplifted my heart!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/7/2021 4:40:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work. Maybe it will be a big hit one day. Thanks for your visit to my page. I appreciate the kind review. Sara

Chuck Melugin
Date: 6/25/2021 3:45:00 AM

Thanks so much Sara1 I appreciate your review!

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/16/2021 12:10:00 AM

WoW! Chuck, I enjoyed it from start to finish. I found it your lyrics to be so original. Kudos to your and your co-writer. It a beautiful love that’s very relatable. Who hasn't had the blues? I echo what Vijay said, your chorus is awesome. Would love to hear these lyrics set to music. Well done. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Chuck Melugin
Date: 4/19/2021 12:54:00 PM

Thank You!...so much Alexis. Lets do a co write sometime!