Collision

Jet plane soaring into the blue A flock of geese too Bodies raining from the sky A few dead geese too

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/5/2022 7:07:00 AM

Terrible that gesse can cause such a disaster, I presume a flock of small birds could also also take a plane . Scary that take off and landing ar the most dangerous when travelling on a plane. Warren you have always been so kind, and your lovely comments to me and everybody else, are a joy to read - all the best my friend, Jennifer.

Warren Doll
Date: 6/27/2022 9:50:00 AM

Hi Jennifer, such wonderful, heartfelt comments, All the best my friend~ Warren

Mike Gentile

Date: 2/2/2022 6:12:00 AM

Bird strike!!! I am already fearful enough of flying and now you've written this!!! Terrific, terrifying imagery here !! Happy Wednesday!

Warren Doll
Date: 2/5/2022 10:30:00 AM

Hi Mike, great to hear from you. There is only a one in a million chance that this will happen. Happy Saturday~ Warren