Probir Gupta Poet Pantoum

Collaboration Contest

COLLABORATION CONTEST

 
The Petal-Sprinkled Path
 


The petal-sprinkled path 
We walked together
The lip-sharing math
In the cherry weather

We walked together
Time flew with lightning speed
In the cherry weather
Witnessed by the moss and weed

Time flew in lightning speed
We knitted the tales of lips
Witnessed by the moss and weed
Through an ocean moved the ships

We knitted the tales of lips 
Amidst of ancient woodland hidden there 
Through an ocean moved the ships
In a quiescence of lulls spell, time wears

Amidst of ancient woodland hidden there, 
Outcropping of pleasure, around, and through
In a quiescence of lulls spell, time wears
Audience veil, ardent scents, and blush dew

Outcropping of pleasure around and through
Bring forth a curtain of rare verdant trees
Audience veil, ardent scent, and blush dew
Peering out heavens trickle summer seas

Bring forth a curtain of rare verdant trees
The lip-sharing math
Peering out heavens trickle summer seas
The petal-sprinkled path

7/7/2017

 

Poetry Contest: COLLABORATION CONTEST 
Sponsored by: JAN ALLISON

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Joanna Daniel July 15, 2017 at 6:22 AM Lovely collaboration, Probir and Eve, and that too with such a difficult form, well done indeed:)

Joseph May July 11, 2017 at 6:30 AM like the form you used and how you climbed the steps on the petal sprinkled path ..Beautiful collaboration....

Connie Marcum Wong July 10, 2017 at 3:54 AM Wow, Eve and Probir...this collaboration is exquisite! : ) Probir Gupta July 11, 2017 at 1:08 AM Thank you, Connie ...

Demetrios Trifiatis July 8, 2017 at 1:57 AM Admirable Pantoum, knitted by poetic ability and inspiration dear, Probir. Good luck my friend! Probir Gupta July 11, 2017 at 1:06 AM Thank you so much ...

Eve Roper July 7, 2017 at 8:36 PM Perfect, Probir, thank you for the honor to write a collaboration poem with you.~* Probir Gupta July 7, 2017 at 8:47 PM Primarily an honour for me ... Why I say so you know ... Thank you ...

Charlie Smith July 7, 2017 at 8:31 PM Wonderful collaboration Probir, congratulations... Probir Gupta July 7, 2017 at 8:37 PM Thank you, Charlie ... my first collaboration ...