Collaboration Contest

COLLABORATION CONTEST

 
The Petal-Sprinkled Path
 


The petal-sprinkled path 
We walked together
The lip-sharing math
In the cherry weather

We walked together
Time flew with lightning speed
In the cherry weather
Witnessed by the moss and weed

Time flew in lightning speed
We knitted the tales of lips
Witnessed by the moss and weed
Through an ocean moved the ships

We knitted the tales of lips 
Amidst of ancient woodland hidden there 
Through an ocean moved the ships
In a quiescence of lulls spell, time wears

Amidst of ancient woodland hidden there, 
Outcropping of pleasure, around, and through
In a quiescence of lulls spell, time wears
Audience veil, ardent scents, and blush dew

Outcropping of pleasure around and through
Bring forth a curtain of rare verdant trees
Audience veil, ardent scent, and blush dew
Peering out heavens trickle summer seas

Bring forth a curtain of rare verdant trees
The lip-sharing math
Peering out heavens trickle summer seas
The petal-sprinkled path

7/7/2017

 

Poetry Contest: COLLABORATION CONTEST 
Sponsored by: JAN ALLISON
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Date: 7/15/2017 6:22:00 AM
Lovely collaboration, Probir and Eve, and that too with such a difficult form, well done indeed:)
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Date: 7/11/2017 6:30:00 AM
like the form you used and how you climbed the steps on the petal sprinkled path ..Beautiful collaboration....
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Date: 7/10/2017 3:54:00 AM
Wow, Eve and Probir...this collaboration is exquisite! : )
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/11/2017 1:08:00 AM
Thank you, Connie ...
Date: 7/8/2017 1:57:00 AM
Admirable Pantoum, knitted by poetic ability and inspiration dear, Probir. Good luck my friend!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/11/2017 1:06:00 AM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 7/7/2017 8:36:00 PM
Perfect, Probir, thank you for the honor to write a collaboration poem with you.~*
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/7/2017 8:47:00 PM
Primarily an honour for me ... Why I say so you know ... Thank you ...
Date: 7/7/2017 8:31:00 PM
Wonderful collaboration Probir, congratulations...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/7/2017 8:37:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie ... my first collaboration ...
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