Collaboration Contest

On Alabaster Wings

I dream of taking flight with you, around Saturn's rings
If only we could soar above the clouds on alabaster wings
Over mountains we'd fly until we reach the brightest star
I'd never tire of starlight dreams if that's where you are

"Elusive" is a word that never describes what we share
I know when I close my eyes, I'll find love waiting there
In your arms I feel a soft blush, warming my complexion
Our kisses grow passionate, igniting the flame of affection

An elliptical embrace, amidst the seducing central sun
Within stellar nurseries, where our love has been spun
Just like binary stars, exchanging solar sensual flares
Our love strengthens as we climb the seraphic stairs

As we sail celestial seas, I have your heart by my side
On alabaster wings, what an enchanting rhythmical ride
The universe our playground as we frolic through with ease
Your touch, a Supernova bliss breathing in a botanical breeze

We cling in love's embrace, once more circling 'round the moon
fearing the rising light of dawn will separate us much too soon
But each night I'll be with you when I close my eyes and dream
as we take flight amid the stars when moonlight is all agleam


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        Sixth of July, 2017
      Collaboration Contest
   Sponsored by Jan Alllison

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/15/2017 7:51:00 PM
Thank you, WW, for taking a celestial flight with me.
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Date: 11/15/2017 7:42:00 PM
As I commented to Lin, WW, a very dreamy write.
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Date: 11/15/2017 1:41:00 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful co-writing, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/15/2017 11:26:00 AM
wow Winged Warrior you blew me away with your enchanting poem written with Lin (I'm so delighted you collaborated with her:-):-) , many congrats on your top place:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/10/2017 9:18:00 AM
Excellently beautiful as well as sweetly romantic, Winged Warrior and Lin:) a sure winner:)
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Date: 7/7/2017 9:03:00 AM
Wow, Winged Warrior and Lin, you guys did an excellent job... this is beautiful..
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Date: 7/6/2017 7:42:00 PM
Bravo! Bravo! winner winner chicken dinner:) Fantastic collaboration WW and Lin:)
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Date: 7/6/2017 4:10:00 PM
Wow!! Now, this is outstanding. You two have really done a beautiful, loving poem that brings the reader to such a special place!! Very nice lines in this! I would like to save this as another favorite :) Good luck in the contest !
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Date: 7/6/2017 4:06:00 PM
You're as wonderful a writing partner, as you are flying beside me amid the stars. Thank you for such fun in our experience together.
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Date: 7/6/2017 4:05:00 PM
My friend, I just left this comment on Jan's post: Absolutely and incredibly beautiful. I loved this poem and how it flows so melodically and softly, which I know is hard to accomplish when collaborating. Both of you did such a wonderful job with this, probably the best I have read for this contest. Nicely done both poets. You and Jan did an amazing job with this.
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