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Collaboration Contest

On Alabaster Wings

I dream of taking flight with you, around Saturn's rings
If only we could soar above the clouds on alabaster wings
Over mountains we'd fly until we reach the brightest star
I'd never tire of starlight dreams if that's where you are

"Elusive" is a word that never describes what we share
I know when I close my eyes, I'll find love waiting there
In your arms I feel a soft blush, warming my complexion
Our kisses grow passionate, igniting the flame of affection

An elliptical embrace, amidst the seducing central sun
Within stellar nurseries, where our love has been spun
Just like binary stars, exchanging solar sensual flares
Our love strengthens as we climb the seraphic stairs

As we sail celestial seas, I have your heart by my side
On alabaster wings, what an enchanting rhythmical ride
The universe our playground as we frolic through with ease
Your touch, a Supernova bliss breathing in a botanical breeze

We cling in love's embrace, once more circling 'round the moon
fearing the rising light of dawn will separate us much too soon
But each night I'll be with you when I close my eyes and dream
as we take flight amid the stars when moonlight is all agleam


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        Sixth of July, 2017
      Collaboration Contest
   Sponsored by Jan Alllison

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James Inman November 15, 2017 at 7:41 PM Lin, the two of you have left me floating on air with this dreamy poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 15, 2017 at 1:41 PM - Congratulations on your wonderful co-writing, Lin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith November 15, 2017 at 1:23 PM I knew this was a winner when I first read it....congrats Lin Lane November 15, 2017 at 1:27 PM Many thanks for saying so, Tim.

Jan Allison November 15, 2017 at 11:25 AM wow Lin and Winged Warrior you blew me away with your enchanting poem, many congrats on your top place:-) hugs jan xx Lin Lane November 15, 2017 at 1:27 PM Thank you so very much, Jan. It was fun to write about wings with one who wears them so well.

Joanna Daniel July 10, 2017 at 9:21 AM Excellently beautiful as well as sweetly romantic, Lin Lane and Winged Warrior:) a sure winner:) Lin Lane July 10, 2017 at 10:10 AM Warrior is the kind of chivalrous guy who opens the door to writing sweet romance. Thanks for liking this one so well, Jo.

Joseph May July 7, 2017 at 9:03 AM Wow, Lin and Winged Warrior you guys did an excellent job, this is beautiful.. Lin Lane July 7, 2017 at 10:06 AM We appreciate your read and comment, Joseph. Thank you.

James Inman July 7, 2017 at 8:51 AM A beautiful collaboration Lin. I love ethereal poems and this one makes me feel like I'm in a dream. Lin Lane July 7, 2017 at 10:05 AM Thank you very much, James. Your comment meant a lot.

Andrea Dietrich July 6, 2017 at 11:38 PM Really sweet poem, Lin . Too bad we can't know the collaborators this time until we see the winners' list and you WILL be on it! Lin Lane July 7, 2017 at 5:40 AM Thank you for thinking so, and yes we can see who wrote together.

Daniel Turner July 6, 2017 at 7:45 PM Bravo! Bravo! winner winner chicken dinner:) Fantastic collaboration WW and Lin:) Very wise upgrade:) Lin Lane July 6, 2017 at 10:04 PM Thank you.

Tim Smith July 6, 2017 at 4:25 PM What a wonderful weave of two poetic hearts fluttering in the breeze. Lin Lane July 6, 2017 at 6:53 PM Thank you so very much for the kind comments, Tim.

Heidi Sands July 6, 2017 at 4:12 PM I have left a comment on the other post on this. It is an outstanding beautiful poem , a favorite, such great lines. I love it! Congratulations to both of you. Good luck in the contest :) Lin Lane July 6, 2017 at 4:17 PM Thank you so very much for your comments and well wishes, Heidi. We both enjoyed the dream.

Winged Warrior July 6, 2017 at 4:11 PM A beautiful masterpiece my lady...inspired by your artistry, warmth, poetic charm and inner/outer beauty...the pleasure was all mine...I bow to your presence...^WW^ Lin Lane July 6, 2017 at 4:16 PM If anyone bows, we'll do it together. You are always gallant, a true gentleman. It was my pleasure to journey to the stars with you.

Chris Green July 6, 2017 at 4:03 PM Absolutely and incredibly beautiful. I loved this poem and how it flows so melodically and softly, which I know is hard to accomplish when collaborating. Both of you did such a wonderful job with this, probably the best I have read for this contest. Nicely done both poets. Lin Lane July 6, 2017 at 4:14 PM Thank you for such lovely comments and encouragement, Chris. My warrior makes it more than a dream to fly with him.