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On Alabaster Wings I dream of taking flight with you, around Saturn's rings If only we could soar above the clouds on alabaster wings Over mountains we'd fly until we reach the brightest star I'd never tire of starlight dreams if that's where you are "Elusive" is a word that never describes what we share I know when I close my eyes, I'll find love waiting there In your arms I feel a soft blush, warming my complexion Our kisses grow passionate, igniting the flame of affection An elliptical embrace, amidst the seducing central sun Within stellar nurseries, where our love has been spun Just like binary stars, exchanging solar sensual flares Our love strengthens as we climb the seraphic stairs As we sail celestial seas, I have your heart by my side On alabaster wings, what an enchanting rhythmical ride The universe our playground as we frolic through with ease Your touch, a Supernova bliss breathing in a botanical breeze We cling in love's embrace, once more circling 'round the moon fearing the rising light of dawn will separate us much too soon But each night I'll be with you when I close my eyes and dream as we take flight amid the stars when moonlight is all agleam *******___________****** Sixth of July, 2017 Collaboration Contest Sponsored by Jan Alllison

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Date: 11/15/2017 7:41:00 PM
Lin, the two of you have left me floating on air with this dreamy poem.
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Date: 11/15/2017 1:41:00 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful co-writing, Lin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/15/2017 1:23:00 PM
I knew this was a winner when I first read it....congrats
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Date: 11/15/2017 1:27:00 PM
Many thanks for saying so, Tim.
Date: 11/15/2017 11:25:00 AM
wow Lin and Winged Warrior you blew me away with your enchanting poem, many congrats on your top place:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/15/2017 1:27:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Jan. It was fun to write about wings with one who wears them so well.
Date: 7/10/2017 9:21:00 AM
Excellently beautiful as well as sweetly romantic, Lin Lane and Winged Warrior:) a sure winner:)
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Date: 7/10/2017 10:10:00 AM
Warrior is the kind of chivalrous guy who opens the door to writing sweet romance. Thanks for liking this one so well, Jo.
Date: 7/7/2017 9:03:00 AM
Wow, Lin and Winged Warrior you guys did an excellent job, this is beautiful..
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Date: 7/7/2017 10:06:00 AM
We appreciate your read and comment, Joseph. Thank you.
Date: 7/7/2017 8:51:00 AM
A beautiful collaboration Lin. I love ethereal poems and this one makes me feel like I'm in a dream.
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Date: 7/7/2017 10:05:00 AM
Thank you very much, James. Your comment meant a lot.
Date: 7/6/2017 11:38:00 PM
Really sweet poem, Lin . Too bad we can't know the collaborators this time until we see the winners' list and you WILL be on it!
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Date: 7/7/2017 5:40:00 AM
Thank you for thinking so, and yes we can see who wrote together.
Date: 7/6/2017 7:45:00 PM
Bravo! Bravo! winner winner chicken dinner:) Fantastic collaboration WW and Lin:) Very wise upgrade:)
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Date: 7/6/2017 10:04:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 7/6/2017 4:25:00 PM
What a wonderful weave of two poetic hearts fluttering in the breeze.
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Date: 7/6/2017 6:53:00 PM
Thank you so very much for the kind comments, Tim.
Date: 7/6/2017 4:12:00 PM
I have left a comment on the other post on this. It is an outstanding beautiful poem , a favorite, such great lines. I love it! Congratulations to both of you. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 7/6/2017 4:17:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your comments and well wishes, Heidi. We both enjoyed the dream.
Date: 7/6/2017 4:11:00 PM
A beautiful masterpiece my lady...inspired by your artistry, warmth, poetic charm and inner/outer beauty...the pleasure was all mine...I bow to your presence...^WW^
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Date: 7/6/2017 4:16:00 PM
If anyone bows, we'll do it together. You are always gallant, a true gentleman. It was my pleasure to journey to the stars with you.
Date: 7/6/2017 4:03:00 PM
Absolutely and incredibly beautiful. I loved this poem and how it flows so melodically and softly, which I know is hard to accomplish when collaborating. Both of you did such a wonderful job with this, probably the best I have read for this contest. Nicely done both poets.
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Date: 7/6/2017 4:14:00 PM
Thank you for such lovely comments and encouragement, Chris. My warrior makes it more than a dream to fly with him.

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