Collaboration Contest

A True Friend Forever


When times are tough, I turn to God
For he will lead me in the right direction
Wending me through all the façade
While forgiving all of my imperfection

For God gives me strength to rise above
Any road blocks that are in the way
Teaching me with unconditional love
To live fullest with gratitude every day

Helping to restrain the demons within
God wraps me up in his warm embrace
Washing away all my shameful sin
While showering me with his love and grace

I am willing to give and sacrifice
With all that I am called to do
God grants me all that does suffice
While showing me all that is true

As this journey of mine soon reaches its end
For God my love and faith will be strong
In hopes when it’s time my soul will transcend
Because heaven is where I ultimately belong

Placed 2nd in contest:  Please choose your writing partner for my collaboration contest.

Heidi Sands and Jeremy Smith

7/3/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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May Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 4:30 PM
Beautifully expressed...Congrats to both of you on a fine win
Sands Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 4:46 PM
Thank you Joseph :)
Inman Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 8:20 PM
A lovely write Heidi.
Sands Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 4:37 AM
Thank you. It was co-written with Jeremy Smith. :)
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 1:50 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful co-writing, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 3:11 PM
Thank you Anne - Lise :)
Allison Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 11:35 AM
A beautiful uplifting poem Heidi and a delightful collaboration with Jeremy:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Sands Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 3:11 PM
Thank you Jan :)
Lee Sr. Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 5:22 PM
More than "WoW" that's what I need a fellowship/partnership/authorship like I used to have back in the beginning. Words brought together by people of divert realities. Yet all saying the same thing, all rejoicing in God's gift(s). Write ON fellow wordsmith. Keep writing. "there's praise in words and words in praise" Blessing :0 James E Lee Sr.
Sands Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 5:24 PM
Thank you so much James. Your comment is very much appreciated! :)
Warrior Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 6:53 PM
A well-crafted collab my friends...keep up the great work...god bless...^WW^
Sands Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 6:56 PM
Thanks WW! Very appreciated. :)
May Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 12:46 PM
A beautiful duet you guys...soupmail
Sands Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 2:04 PM
Thanks Joseph. Got it,, thanks..soup mail back.
White Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 11:49 AM
That was a wonderful collaboration Heidi and Jeremy :)
Sands Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 2:03 PM
Thank you Darren. :)
Daniel Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 11:23 PM
What a wonderful collaborative poem, Heidi and Jeremy!! encourages the soul to hang on in faith:) very well composed:)
Sands Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 2:00 PM
Hi Jo Daniel . Thank you. I am so happy it is encouraging! Your comment is appreciated.
Mccall Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 8:31 PM
What a wonderful uplifting collaboration this is the two of you have captured the truth of Gods strength and love so perfectly. Well done Heidi and Jeremy in it goes.
Sands Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 8:34 PM
Thank you so much Edward. :)
Hamilton Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 6:52 PM
Very nice collaboration you two, a very spiritual write, along with great rhymes! Congrats to you both for a seamless write.
Sands Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 7:08 PM
I also have to get around to trying that song! :)
Sands Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 6:57 PM
Thank you John. That is very nice to say. Much appreciated :)
Smith Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 6:52 PM
It was great creating poetry with you I'm very honored to have had this special opportunity to write with you, Heidi :)
Sands Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 6:56 PM
Thank you Jeremy, I very much enjoyed it and I am happy you brought it up. I look forward to more :)
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