Dalila Agtani Poet Free verse

Collaborating In the Clouds

Why, it hasten
As the clouds open
Yes, I’m afraid, I got no appointment
I need to acquaint
My problems are hard to understand
But just the same I’m emphatic and dream
Somehow, many things happen
There are lightning and thunders
They resisted that  I understand
Here, it came a Helping Hand
‘though abandoned and denied
Yet, I believe there’s heaven
Maybe tomorrow it redeems
And finally it enjoins to a meeting again. 

Dalila Agtani
6/25/12

Entered in a contest  sponsored by 
P.D. 
Contest Name Collaborating In the Clouds

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 9, 2012 at 1:54 PM congrats Dalila on a most beautiful write and win for this theme of visual beauty in communion with God in the clouds luv.. magnifico work.. am dealing with concussion since a nasty fall last week so not able to be on computer but getting back slowly luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown July 9, 2012 at 7:07 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in P. D.'s "Clouds" contest Dalila. Love, Carol

David Williams July 9, 2012 at 2:46 AM a funeral pyre has to be lit at dawn, then by sunset it has to have consumed everything, so the only thing left are memories...David

David Williams July 9, 2012 at 1:36 AM Dalila congrats on your win...David

Poet Destroyer A July 7, 2012 at 11:53 PM Dalila, congratulations with your beautiful collaboration in the clouds. Read every poem over and over. Thank you for the support, God Bless :-) PD

Elizabeth Wesley June 27, 2012 at 9:42 AM Itoo think we gain a different perspective in the clouds or separated from what we experience now. Love your analogies for trouble and where our help comes from. It is a special poem and best wishes in the contest for you!>