Coldness Lingers

the spring air is damp
the sun false in its brightness
spring is a mirage
as winter's coldness lingers
I look at the sun and dream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Vaso Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 8:59 PM
Very beautiful!
Kithinji Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 10:03 AM
Great summer coming!
Kendrick Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 8:47 AM
Very expressive and descriptive..Its lines hold truth..Summer is now upon us in the south..Hot and humid..Enjoyed reading your work this morning..Sara
Richards Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 4:06 PM
Where I live....summer is coming this weekend, according to the weather-man! Hot hot hot!
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