Cold World

Cold World
  Blizzards pass, storms ensue,
  Snowy paths, guide my view.
  Where roaring winds are in pursuit, 
  my heart is where hope is imbued.
  
  Laying the bedding, in earth’s full view,
  I hunker down, and slumber ensues.
  Where hope is, I am in pursuit, 
  For this cruel world is in need of review.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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artlyy Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 10:40 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
January 13, 2025 at 10:25 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
A  Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 12:29 PM
Samantha Lim, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
Palmer Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 8:15 AM
lovely write Samantha, but it's our leaders that needs review,what's the matter with the world,has the world gone bad,nothing wrong with the world just the ppl thats in it
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