Iman Roy Poet Tanka

Cold Winter Shower

Conscious breezy plight
Into the cold, icy lake.
Eyes closed,mountains dozed
I emancipate my love,
In nakedness of my soul.


Tempting blue mystery 
Fierce, glitters, water pure
Threaten of stillness.
Quiet wintry waves, fallacy
Drifts my body, like careless. 




TOP 500 in International PoetrySoup Contest 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 4, 2011 at 8:11 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Iman.Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown July 10, 2011 at 12:33 PM Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Iman. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown January 18, 2011 at 3:52 AM Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry Iman. I am pleased to read your poetry today and hope you will continue to write. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta January 17, 2011 at 8:25 AM I can relate to this cold winter shower, generally I am there in India in winter. But not this year

Poet Destroyer A January 17, 2011 at 7:53 AM Nice set of tankas, chilling but, awesome,..p.d.