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Cold Winter Shower

Conscious breezy plight Into the cold, icy lake. Eyes closed,mountains dozed I emancipate my love, In nakedness of my soul. Tempting blue mystery Fierce, glitters, water pure Threaten of stillness. Quiet wintry waves, fallacy Drifts my body, like careless. TOP 500 in International PoetrySoup Contest 2011

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Date: 8/4/2011 8:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Iman.Love, Carol
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Date: 7/10/2011 12:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Iman. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/18/2011 3:52:00 AM
Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry Iman. I am pleased to read your poetry today and hope you will continue to write. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2011 8:25:00 AM
I can relate to this cold winter shower, generally I am there in India in winter. But not this year
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Date: 1/17/2011 7:53:00 AM
Nice set of tankas, chilling but, awesome,..p.d.
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