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Cold Night Creeping I saw the dark and cold night creeping, pushing out day’s glorious light, that reassured despair’s delight in stirring hopeless sounds of sleeping. I felt the pain of daydreams dying flowing through my heart and soul and ringing loud the painful dole of night’s long song of stillness crying. Then came the faith in morning dawning, spreading its most brilliant ray; quick born again was hope of day that thru dark webs of night was spawning. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Contest: Enclosed Rhyme Sponsor: Dear Heart Judged: 10/01/2018

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Constance La France

Date: 10/2/2018 3:04:00 PM

Sandra, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent write, well done ~

Joseph May

Date: 10/1/2018 9:43:00 PM

Beautiful write Sandra Congrats on your win..

John Gondolf

Date: 9/30/2018 1:52:00 PM

Hope is always reborn with the new sunrise. Beautifully written, Sandra, congrats on your win. John

Sandra Haight
Date: 10/1/2018 2:29:00 PM

Thank you, John, for your congrats and very empathetic comment. Much appreciated! Sandra

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/30/2018 5:28:00 AM

Beautifully written, congratulations on your win!

Sandra Haight
Date: 10/1/2018 2:28:00 PM

Thank you very much, Tania, for your congratulations and lovely comment. Hugs, Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/29/2018 8:34:00 PM

Yep..I knew it would top the list in First place Sandra! Congratulations on your deserving win! : )

Sandra Haight
Date: 10/1/2018 2:27:00 PM

Thank you, Connie, for your congratulations and very positive comment! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper

Date: 9/29/2018 7:55:00 PM

a wonderful inspiring write dear friend congratulations on you win

Sandra Haight
Date: 10/1/2018 2:26:00 PM

Thank you very much, Eve. I appreciate your congratulations and lovely comment so much. Hugs, Sandra

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/29/2018 7:53:00 PM

Metaphorically and poetically beautiful, Sandra. So true, how the night's dark dread and worry can ensnare us.. Consolation comes in rays of light and daydreams that bloom anew.. Your poem is filled with thought provoking beauty. Congratulations on your excellent win.. ~Susan

Sandra Haight
Date: 10/1/2018 2:26:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan, for your congratulations on very uplifting and positive comments. I appreciate them so much. Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/29/2018 6:54:00 PM

Congrats on sharing your gold medal win, Sandra.

Sandra Haight
Date: 10/1/2018 2:24:00 PM

Thank you very much, Line, for your visit and congrats! Hugs, Sandra

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 9/11/2018 4:44:00 PM

Nice piece Sandra, fine penning with excellent rhyme.Blessings,Gordon

Sandra Haight
Date: 9/11/2018 7:29:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gordon, for your visit and very uplifting comments! Much appreciated. Sandra :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/11/2018 1:38:00 PM

Wow Sandra, your second stanza had me weeping. Just magnificent writing my friend! I know this will top the list of winners! : )

Sandra Haight
Date: 9/11/2018 7:28:00 PM

Thank you, Connie, for your empathetic and very supportive, encouraging comments. Hugs, Sandra

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/11/2018 10:33:00 AM

The morning light is always welcome and all our fears and thoughts of doom fade away. Lovely verse Sandra. Good luck. Tom

Sandra Haight
Date: 9/11/2018 7:26:00 PM

Thank you, Tom. I am pleased that you like my poem and the metaphors woven into it. Again, I appreciate your visits and wonderful uplifting comments. Sandra