Caren Krutsinger Poet Haibun

Cold Mountain Water

Nothing refreshes as hard or as fast  As cold mountain water, a spurt or a blast.
It revitalizes me immediately, I cannot get enough  Bring over my  feed bucket, I am going to savor this stuff.



                               delighting my mouth
                              refreshing me instantly 
                               cold mountain water

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Judy Ball August 23, 2020 at 1:34 PM I agree Nothing tastes better. A fine write. God Bless, JB Caren Krutsinger August 23, 2020 at 7:59 PM Thank you so much. We keep thinking other things will refresh us but not nearly as well.

Jennifer Proxenos August 23, 2020 at 8:37 AM I once in the mountains of Greece came upone a running river, not terribly wide or deep but beautiful - clean and bright blue as was the sky - it was a scorching day and my husband and I actually went into it knee deep, we could see our toes, we cooled down and drunk from it also. I understand your sentiments completely! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Caren Krutsinger August 23, 2020 at 7:59 PM Ah, this sounds so WONDERFUL Jennifer!

Tom Cunningham August 23, 2020 at 1:29 AM There is no sweeter taste Caren, no surprise that drinks companies market it. Tom Caren Krutsinger August 23, 2020 at 8:00 PM I have to admit I wonder if they are really using GENUINE Mountain stream water? Snicker. Snicker.