Perhaps someday peace will come. ~
The wintry pall of cold Minneapolis, two thirty-seven year olds, shots thundered into an unexpected eternity, but youth promised to age, to go on to another day. A bleeding sacrifice, suddenly the wintry pall of cold Minneapolis, became searingly bitter, became unmercifully more frozen. Sing of the lost peace, in the candlelight and flowers on the streets. ~
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