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Cold Hearted Love

Cold smiles, cadaver touch Whatever love you had for me, now ain’t much My tender heart still not yet tough In-bed pleas to a deaf shoulder get covered with stone silent rebuff You flaunt your affairs openly, with no regard for my feelings You don’t tip up the stairs quietly, or try to hide your indiscreet dealings Empty promises, empty promises Broken vows written in blood Empty promises, empty promises Scarlet cold hearted love You gave me lots of flash photos of hope, as you kept plenty of negatives in the darkroom You whispered a lot of mirrors and smoke, then disappeared into a world of distant, cold gloom Once you got your hands on the joint account, the marital demands didn’t seem to matter much Now you’re on the move like a bunny beach ball ready to bounce Saying we lost our groove, and your love gets paid by the pound, not by the ounce Empty promises, empty promises Hollow house built in blood Empty promises, empty promises Bricks of stone cold hearted love Cold smiles, cadaver touch Whatever love you had for me, now ain’t much Bankroll from other lovers lay brazenly on the night stand Cigar smell cologne on your clothes, scented trail mix of another man You kept one promise though, said soon it was all gonna end And that when we part ways, we ain’t gonna be best friends Empty promises, empty promises Scarlet tears flowing in a river of blood Empty promises, empty promises Love got carried away in a crimson flood

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/2/2017 9:00:00 AM
Oh Freddie, I find that this poem to be sad. This poem is well written. You need a hug..Yep i agree with Kim it is an emotional poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 6/9/2017 3:42:00 AM
Wonderful, wonderful lyric (that's how it feels to me) Such a talented, dark rhythmic piece of wonderful poetry.
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Date: 6/8/2017 6:01:00 PM
Hang on, Freddie. I'll get the bourbon. Easily be turned into a classic blues song in the right hands. I love it:) Carry on, carrying on, cause when you get back, I'll be gone!!
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Date: 6/8/2017 10:28:00 AM
A very emotional write. Nicely done, Freddie!
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Date: 6/8/2017 9:38:00 AM
Fantabulous, Freddy. I sure like it a lot :)
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Date: 6/8/2017 9:24:00 AM
Excellent Freddie. This is put together so well. A sad dark reality.
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Date: 6/8/2017 8:59:00 AM
This was very cool Freddie. I like the form of this and how it just seems to sing as I read it. Though the theme is dark and unfortunately something many can relate to, your talent shines happily in this.
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