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Cold Heart - Monoku

freezing rain embalms cold heart ~ pellucid shell fissures with warm beating



12/23/2017
Written for Monoku Contest
Sponser:  Silent One

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Maria Williams

January 7, 2018 at 5:39 AM

Congratulations on your win Judy, a very deserving win on this brilliant Monoku...Maria xx

Richard Lamoureux

January 3, 2018 at 9:53 AM

You are really good at these.

Judith S

January 3, 2018 at 9:57 AM

Awh ... thank you Richard!! :)

Line Gauthier

January 2, 2018 at 2:30 PM

Congrats on your win, Judith.

Judith S

January 2, 2018 at 5:18 PM

Thank you Line!!!

Richard Lamoureux

December 28, 2017 at 7:54 PM

Happy New year. I see congrats are in order for this tremendous piece.

Judith S

January 2, 2018 at 10:34 AM

Thank you Richard! Happy New Year to you as well!!!

Harry Horsman

December 28, 2017 at 5:25 PM

Poignant poetry, love this, congrats in contest, and a Happy New Year, Judith.

Judith S

January 2, 2018 at 10:35 AM

Thank you soooo much Harry! And Happy New Year wishes to you and your family as well! ~ Judy

Probir Gupta

December 28, 2017 at 4:36 AM

Rich and deep ... Congratulations ....

Judith S

January 2, 2018 at 10:40 AM

Thank you for your kind comment Probir! Happy New Year to you! ~Judy

Anisha Dutta

December 27, 2017 at 10:35 PM

So well-penned. Congrats Judith. Merry Christmas

Judith S

January 2, 2018 at 10:41 AM

Thank you dear Anish for your nice comment! Happy New Year to you and your family! Best, Judy

Eve Roper

December 27, 2017 at 8:43 PM

congratulations on your win, Judith, nicely done. hugs eve

Judith S

January 2, 2018 at 10:43 AM

Thank you kind lady :) Happy New Year!!! ~ Judy

Joseph May

December 27, 2017 at 7:56 PM

Congrats on your win Judith

Judith S

January 2, 2018 at 10:44 AM

Thanks Joseph!! Happy New Year !!!!

Paul Callus

December 27, 2017 at 7:45 AM

A meaningful one-liner, Judith; there is always hope, even for cold hearts! ~ Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul

James Inman

December 27, 2017 at 12:53 AM

Wise words Judith.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 26, 2017 at 10:22 PM

A potent penning! Congratulations on your win Judith :) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich

December 26, 2017 at 9:31 PM

Great to come here again and tell you CONGRATULATIONS. Awesome win, Judith.

Mike Gentile

December 26, 2017 at 8:57 PM

And congratulations to you Judy!! Excellent!!

Agnes Krampe

December 26, 2017 at 8:25 PM

Lovely, Judith - congrats on your win.

Judith S

January 2, 2018 at 10:31 AM

Thank you Agnes!!!

Susan Ashley

December 26, 2017 at 7:40 PM

Returning with congratulations Judy for your top win with this beautiful and meaningful write. ~Susan

Judith S

December 26, 2017 at 7:56 PM

Thank you dear Susan :)

Janice Canerdy

December 26, 2017 at 4:07 PM

Congrats on your win, Judith! Janice

Judith S

December 26, 2017 at 7:52 PM

Thank you Janice!!

Lewis Raynes

December 26, 2017 at 3:51 PM

Hey super congratulations on ur write winning Judy

Judith S

December 26, 2017 at 7:51 PM

Thank you Lewis!!! ;P

Charlie Smith

December 26, 2017 at 3:05 PM

Congratulations Judith, well done...

Judith S

December 26, 2017 at 7:46 PM

Thank you Charlie!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 26, 2017 at 2:55 PM

- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Judith ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judith S

December 26, 2017 at 7:46 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise !!

Silent One

December 26, 2017 at 1:32 PM

This is excellent, the heart is thawed through love and warmth... Congratulations on your first place in the Monoku 1 contest Judy..

Judith S

December 26, 2017 at 5:56 PM

Thank you so much for your comments Silent One .. and for the honor of being amongst the first place wins in your contest!

Jack Ellison

December 24, 2017 at 4:17 PM

Not familiar with a monoku... I'm a Humorick man!!! Merry Ho Ho dear Judith S xxxxxxx

Judith S

December 26, 2017 at 5:55 PM

Well my dear Jack ... that's because you are THE limerick man!!! Yes .. my monoku is too heavy for you. You are definitely a man of humor. Thanks for visiting :)