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Cold Hay Rides

Hay rides and starlit nights Spooky cresent red tinted moon Howling and the owl schrieks Big eyes strain to see where the noise originated Prickling skin and scary masked raiders Screams and little feet take flight To the bonfire and mom's warm arms

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/20/2010 8:25:00 PM
You brought back some great memories, Doris. We took hay rides as teens and had fun snuggling 'neath the straw. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/20/2010 8:11:00 PM
Very good Doris, I can taste the smores.
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Date: 10/20/2010 7:05:00 PM
Oh, how fun. The little ones fleeing to mom's arms! Great one for the season, Doris!!
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Date: 10/20/2010 5:33:00 PM
Love that last line....sums it all so nicely!
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Date: 10/20/2010 12:55:00 PM
Good one Doris....I tell my kids spooky mother-in-law stories on Halloween......Larry
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Date: 10/20/2010 11:44:00 AM
this brought back many memories...well done Doris..TAH
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