Cold Flower

A flower shivers
In the coolest Autumn night
Waiting for the sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Murphy Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 10:53 AM
very nice enjoyed faleshia
Sweetheart Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 9:44 PM
Sounds just like me Larry.. I can relate to your lovely Haiku words.. had a sweater on all day today.. and it was almost 90 here but breezy.. luv.. ciao..
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 8:13 PM
Ah yes, the giver of all life, how they drink in the liquid light. Lovely! Aloha, Connie
Devonshire Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 8:10 PM
It's sad to see the flowers disappearing as winter approaches. A very moving haiku, Larry. The "flower" could very well represent a human life. Love, Carolyn
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August 19, 2010 at 7:08 PM
such a beautiful use of words,, an adoring write, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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