Cold Flower

A flower shivers In the coolest Autumn night Waiting for the sun

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Faleshia Murphy

Date: 8/20/2010 10:53:00 AM

very nice enjoyed faleshia

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/19/2010 9:44:00 PM

Sounds just like me Larry.. I can relate to your lovely Haiku words.. had a sweater on all day today.. and it was almost 90 here but breezy.. luv.. ciao..

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/19/2010 8:13:00 PM

Ah yes, the giver of all life, how they drink in the liquid light. Lovely! Aloha, Connie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/19/2010 8:10:00 PM

It's sad to see the flowers disappearing as winter approaches. A very moving haiku, Larry. The "flower" could very well represent a human life. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/19/2010 7:08:00 PM

such a beautiful use of words,, an adoring write, enjoyed your write..P.D.