Cold Evening Problems

COLD    EVENING  PROBLEMS

Trying to stay warm in front of the fire
Draughts find their way to  my leg, waist or higher
Like little  cold water  trickles
They insist on touches and tickles -
Coming over the window ledge  
Sneaking around the inner edge 
Of the closed windows  fore and aft.
I move to a warmer spot with no draught;
When I  settle  they swarm towards me.
I am attractive like jam to a bee.
How do they know where I am, 
Like radar guided jets (not turbine  but ram)?
I put rugs against the cracks -
Still those airborne  watery attacks.
In desperation  I seal up the door,  
Then find  trickles coming through the floor.
Now it’s double socks and sweater -
Can’t think of  anything better.
Those squirts of cold air wash over
Me even as I try to hide and cover:
Maybe the only way for me tonight
Is go to bed and snuggle up tight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smalling Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 5:16 AM
I knew you were too smart not to outsmart that chilly air ... well done.
Walsh Avatar
December 8, 2010 at 11:39 AM
They are a nightmare aren't they - those bloody draughts! Liz
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