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Cold and Deliberate

Knife straight through the heart
She twists it just a little more
Making sure the point's made



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 3:56 PM
ouch!
Gauthier Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 4:58 PM
not my favourite type of people ~
Wolf Avatar
November 8, 2025 at 8:11 PM
e-gads. So symbolic of this era: 'The Age of Rage.' ~ Kal M. Downes
Gauthier Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 9:09 AM
Yikes ~ so true, we have to be so careful not to inadvertently offend anyone these days.
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